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Kyo
This is the final part of Dalak's adventure. happy.gif



Dalak's Journey Ends




Dalak and Joseph came to a small brick house after an hour of walking.

"I'm sure this is his temple" Dalak told Joseph. "This is where i fought Aquados, but i got in by teleporting, so we have to figure out how to get in through the front door".

"I think I have an idea" replied Joseph. "Do you still have the Thunder Key?"

"Yeah, I still have it".

"Then try it on the door. Maybe it's also the key into the dungeon". Dalak did as hey was told. Hey inserted the key, and when he turned it, he heard a loud snap from in the lock, but it still turned.
He opened the door, which was made of wood, and inside was a man wearing black robes, surrounded by the elemental runes. Now, Joseph was looking through the doors as well.

The man held his hands above the water and air runes. He chanted some words that Dalak couldn't understand, and lightning came from the runes to his hands. After about 5 seconds, it stopped, then a beam of lighting came out of his hands and shot through a hole in the roof into the sky. Dalak and Joseph looked up at the beam, which went through a single cloud.

Then the sky turned dark and cloudy.

"I was wondering when you'd come, Dalak" the man said without turning around. "And I see you brought Joseph with you. I've heard that he's the greatest warrior in the land".

"Yes, I am" said Joseph. "What have you got against that?"

"Once, a long time ago, a person like you ruined my life by killing my family. After that, I wanted to learn the art of magic, and now-". He stopped in mid-sentence, made a staff of air appear, and fired an orb at Joseph.When it hit him, a flash of yellow light appeared, then after that, his armor was gone. "-I am the master of all magic"

"That's what you think" said Dalak. He drew his dragon longsword, and charged toward the man, while dodging every magic attack. Dalak stopped when the man's staff started glowing. It stopped glowing, then near the top the staff started on fire.

He swung the staff in front of him, and a ball of fire flew at Dalak. He ran from it, but it caught up with him and trapped him in a dome of fire. He tried to slice through it, but his sword only started on fire, he had to stomp on it to put it out.

Then he heard a voice say something, then a row of icicles came toward the man, freezing him. Then, instantly, the fire dome went out. He turned around and saw Alan standing there holding a spellbook.

"What are you doing here?" asked Dalak.

"I have my ways" Alan replied. "Now hurry up and cut him in half!"

Dalak ran up to him, and, with his charred sword, finished off the man in black robes. There was silence for a moment, then he turned around. "Where's Jospeh?"

"He's back at Burthope. Luckily for your sake, I brought tablets that teleport you to Burthope. We aren't in level 40 wilderness yet, only 20". They both teleported back to Burthope.

Back at the Royal Guard, their cheif had heard about the victory. He had all the soldiers line up again.

"Dalak, we heard about you victory in the dungeon. Excellent work, soldier" he said.

"Thank you sir" replied Dalak.

"And apparently we aren't the only ones who got it. Read this." He handed a letter to Dalak. When he took it, the letter had the Ardouge crest on it. He opened it, and here is what it said:


Dalak,

We have heard news of your successful fight against the murderer, and your other heroic deeds. Now that you have slain him and his wyvern Aquados, you are now considered a hero by everyone across Gielinor. Come the the Ardouge castle in 3 days to join the Knights of Ardouge.

Sincerly,

The King of Ardouge


Dalak finally realised that everyone else in the group was looking at the letter. He looked up, then about 5 seconds later everyone started cheering.



3 DAYS LATER


The Ardouge castle was crowded on the knighting day. Dalak walked up the red rug, with cheering people, including his cheif, to both sides of him. He came up tio the king's throne and kneeled down to him. The cheering stopped.

"Dalak", the king said. "You are now a hero to everyone across Gielinor. We thank you for your heroic deeds". He paused for a moment. "You may rise. Sir Dalak". When he stood up, The castle filled with cheering .

"Thank you sir" said Dalak. He noticed a man coming up to him holding a sword. He took the sword from him as he bowed to him. It had an Ardouge insignia engraved in it. He held it up in the air. In a few years of training he could become a full-fledged Knight of Gielinor.


And that dream came true. 4 years later, there was a dragon attacking a town. He and his new friends got into their armor, and ran off to the dragon. When he got there, he saw the dragon attacking a house.

"Bring it on" he said to himself as he lowered his helmet visor and charged into battle.





This is the end of Dalak's journey, but you can still find him wandering around Ardouge, or in the castle. If there is anything you would like me to add, such as what Dalak should do next, post it and I'll think about it. I hope you enjoyed all of his adventures
Richman99
It's pretty good. I didn't like how you skipped 4 years to when he became a full knight. You REALLY REALLY should have talked about.. and maybe even made a new chapter! about his training. my 2 cents.
Kyo
QUOTE(Richman99 @ Aug 23 2007, 03:45 PM) *
It's pretty good. I didn't like how you skipped 4 years to when he became a full knight. You REALLY REALLY should have talked about.. and maybe even made a new chapter! about his training. my 2 cents.


I will think about that, thanks for the idea beret.gif
Kyo
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