It's still really obvious that you're reading from a script. You've done a lot to improve, the words themselves don't seem as scripted any more, but the way it's read, it's still scripted. You don't show emotion in what you're reading. You read a joke just the same as you'd read an obituary.
It's not always that bad, but during Reaver's part, for example at the end "and I think Reaver did something", that's exemplary of what I'm talking about.
Other than that, it was a very interesting salcast, with fun articles and good music.