I decided to make a custom kit because they look so fun. Also, if anyone could tell me how to get the picture instead of the link, that would be fantastic.


The Kit

I will add more if people think it is decent.

Please respond

im not on my computer, so it doesn't come up but if its your avatar it needs some work check out the circle kit and not named kits i made anyway if you need anyhelp just tell me and i'll be glad tommorow when im back on my computer to make loads of changes and try my best to make it a great guide anyway im only 11 so i gotta go to bed Goodnight

its jpeged (meaning its ruined) always always save your work as a PNG

Doesn't matter what it's saved as, it's not brilliant. Also be patient when posting a new kit.. no one will respnd straight away. You neeed to improve the linework and you're lightsource.

The shading needs to be less noticeable, meaning blend it more, and also save it as .PNG or you're screwed.

My best peice of advice? Start again.

Why?

1.It's a JPEG, JPEG =Ruined for ever. You might think whats the point, i spent ages on it. People won't use it if they think it's bad quality. Tough love.
2. Try to pixel before you make a kit. It will help A LOT. Look around pixel studio and look at some tuts. Then you will actually know how to draw, shade and dither.
3. Study the shape of a human. This will add on to point 2.
4.Organise the picture. Jeesh, it's like Zezima's bank threw up on it.

ewwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Sorry, i had to say that. Yes I know it's not constructive criticism, so here it comes.

2/10

Reason: 0/10 is unfair, so 1/10 and it looks a bit human so 2/10.
Those are the only good points.

Bad Points:
Spaghetti Arms! Seriously...fix the bendy arm which reminds me a bit of the arms on Mr. Potatoe Head
JPEG Image: JPEG is good for nothing, except maybe photographs. Save as PNG next time.
Heads: Show me a head which is fully circular without a single non-circular bit, and I will buy you a bar of chocolate. Why? Because they don't exist. Your next kit should be "ahead" of this (heehee)
The Skull: . What...the..hell? That does not look like a skull in any way or form. Looks a bit deformed. Whoevers head that was, i pity him in life, he must have been subject to ridicule.
Organisation: I agree with A manda, it's the worst organisation I've ever seen, and i can't organise things to save my life. Also...why all the high-level rare stuff?
Standing Position: A real human could easily do that, but god, standing like that forever would hurt. ALOT
Goblin: He looks more like the human from the green slimey lagoon. Seriously...
Hair: Not great, but not horrid either. However...name the Emo hair something else, that is a serious stereotype there.
Shields: You seem to missing a square shield, and since when do shields have a single straight line in them?
Design on the Dragon Armour: Okay...what is that? Looks like a sickel and hammer (so, all dragon armour uses are communists, are they?) combined with something odd.

In short....not good. You'll need to work on this. ALOT. I'm not being cruel. But trust me, by being blunt, it gets the message through. Believe me.

~Hutton~

I'm sorry, but this is NOT what I would call the kit of awesomeness. I would call it the King of nastiness. Not being offensive, but it hurts my eyes a bit. The colours are bright, it's not shaded, and some of your items are wack. Fix them up.

I beg to differ. This is not a kit of awesome.

Obviously.

Im not sure exactly what Hutton said (because its too long ), but Im sure its what we all think about this kit.

Fail.

Bah, I have seen worse first kits, trust me *cough* *points at some people that posted here including me*

HAHA ZEZIMA JOKE

Anyways, It's ok. I'm not a huge kitter, I just come here to make some fun avatars sometimes ;-D

btw, your runite armor is actually Zamorak rune armor. I would make plain armor, trimmed armor, gold trimmed armor, and finally gilded rune.No trimming drag(no duh) and get some more weps (scimmys, spears, longs, 2h's, baxes, picks, and wc axes...) and finally just simply some ranging stuff. I saw none (i only looked quickly, sorry if they're there.)

You need better english....

~Hutton~

i love everything but the bodies. i reccomened doing this kit over i will help if it is needed but here. post this on the front page instead of the link.


its ruined forever it has been jpged!

you can un-jpg it, if he still has the original un-changed version on his comp...

it works if you open it in paint, save it as a png, and upload that one (it works for me)



more shading?

accidental post mod delet