Need to get more advanced in this check out spoiler to see what was there:

Sorry, but it looks jpeged, and I just don't like kits with more than one pixel in width or heigh with black outline.

I understand everything but its not jpg its png but rate it _/10.

Sorry, but I just fully don't like this one. Possibly your worst. 2/10

i think its his best but sadly it looks practicly like magics rip kit.im surprised if im the only one who sees it.

I did notice the eyes look slightly similar

1. It is way to thin and the shoulders are terrible.

2. the head is not symetrical

3. It appears to have no shading

4. It looks JPG'd

5. U should probobly want to look into Pm'ing new template ideas to some1 before posting all of these huge threads, and i dont think the Template practice thread was necessary.


Total Rating..: 2.5/10

It needs a ton of work if u want to continue this.

You also Need to get a template u like and STICK WITH IT.

This is probobly your 7th or beyond kit that you've made and then gone on to another one within the week.


Also, i am Sorry to be so direct and Pointing, but if you realy want to get up there, u need to know what u need to be doing and how it needs to be done. If you would like, i could Teach you a few things if you are wiling to listen and willing to stick with it. If you dont think u can stick with learning form me, please either practice more or find some1 who can teach you.

If you can do these you can be a good kit maker such as Rex, Kingy, Magic of Woodcut, Zach, Myself, and others.

If you want to be taught by me, Start Here.

Don't attempt to build any kits until you got the template sussed.

I understand but i thought this was one of my first few good kit templates

Dont put urself down like that, its good, but it just doesnt appeal to some people, wut hes saying is u probobly should practice for a while or play around till you get a Really good kit that looks good and that people might like, then u go ahead and post

BUt dont take wut people say to personally, i did once and i've always wished i hadnt.

thank you

No prob Man

i made a new temp i made a new topic for people to rate it u should check it out