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Rachel Elizabeth Dare
1. Why I would like to join: I want to join because I want to improve my creativity and my writing, I hope I would be accepted...

2. Desired section: Riddles, Jokes & Puzzles (It could be stories, if mystery stories with answers are allowed.)

3. My experience: Not much, We used to have a classroom paper in 5th grade and I used to write their.

4. My example:
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Mr. Detective was in the middle of solving a case, he tried to remember everything that happened. Mrs. Emerson received an unsigned letter. It told her to put ten thousand dollars behind the George Washington statue. If she refused to do this her necklace would be stolen.
She planned to give away the necklace during the party. That is, she was going to sell it to the highest bidder on the stroke of midnight. The money was to go to the Community Chest. To show off the necklace, Mrs. Emerson's old college roommate, Miss Smith, wore it at the party. At first I didn't let Miss Smith out of my sight.
Around eleven 'o clock Miss Smith said she felt ill. She went upstairs to the guest room. She said she wanted to rest a little while.
I went into the room ahead of her. I wanted to make sure no one was there. Then I had her lock the door. And I stood guard in the hall.
Ten minutes passed. Suddenly I heard her scream. A few seconds later. two shots rang out. I called to Miss Smith. She didn't answer.
I broke down the locked door. Miss Smith was lying in bed faint. The necklace was gone from her neck.
When she came to, she could tell me little. Everything had happened so quickly. She had heard and seen nothing. And she had fainted before she could see the thief, she said.
The thief must have got in and out by the window. Two bullets were in the wall above the bed. Miss Smith wasn't killed.
Oh my god! The police has to search the room for the necklace, Miss Smith did it...

WHAT WAS MISS SMITH'S MISTAKE?
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Miss Smith said that she did not see or hear the thief. Yet Mr. Detective heard her scream, and "a few seconds later, two shots rang out."
Miss Smith's mistake was screaming [i]before
the shots were fired.
If she had not seen or heard anyone, she would have had no reason to be frightened. Only after the shots had been fired would she have screamed.


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Po22
Please apply for Stories and Poem if it's a story. There's a link somewhere explaining all this, lemme go find it.

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Greetings aspiring writers! Before applying to the Sal's Realm Newspaper, we ask that you read this topic in its entirety, and follow the guidelines that it provides. Doing so will make the application process much easier for both of us, and will provide you with some necessary information and helpful assistance. Good luck!

Please use the following format to apply:

1. Why I would like to join:

2. Desired section:

3. My experience:

4. My example:
1. Why would you like to join Sal’s Newspaper?

This can be short and sweet. Simply put, just try to let us know what brings you to the newspaper. We appreciate your interest, and we’d like to hear about it.

2. What section would you like to join?

Please refer to the Section Head List in order to see the newspaper sections available for your application. When you choose which section to apply for, please include it in the topic description of your application. You may also want to take note of the corresponding section head because this person must review your application and determine whether or not to accept you. Upon acceptance to the paper, you are allowed to contribute to other sections, although you will be expected to focus most of your articles on the section into which you were accepted.

3. Do you have any experience?

Please provide us with a short description of any relevant experience you have had in this area. If you have written essays, drawn comics, worked on another newspaper, and anything else related, please indicate that for us.

4. Post an example of your work.

Probably the most important part of your application, you must provide us with an example of your own work. Naturally, the work you provide depends on what section you are applying for (i.e. a comic or a story for those respective sections). You may offer material from elsewhere on Sal's forums as an example of your work, but it must be relevant to the section you are applying to join. We are not very strict about the content, so if you have a written example that doesn’t necessarily fall into the category of the section to which you are applying, it is not a big problem. The purpose of the example is for us to observe and evaluate your skill. Try not to post something too short, but a tremendously lengthy work is unnecessary. Your example will not be published in the paper, so keep that in mind.

Other Important Information:
  • An application containing several mistakes does not look good and is more likely to be rejected. Be patient with it, and we recommend that you use a word processing program to write it.
  • Only members of the Newspaper Staff can contribute to the paper. Therefore, you must apply and be accepted in order to do so.
  • If you are accepted, you will be given the permission mask required to see all of the Newspaper Sections, where the work gets done (normally within 24 hours of acceptance). You will no longer need to use the Guest Forums, and you will be expected to make contributions. Activity sweeps are performed on occasion and inactive staff members are removed.
  • If your application is denied, you may reapply once more immediately afterwards, but please take some time to evaluate where you went wrong, and request pointers if necessary. In the event that your second application is declined, you must wait at least one month before you can apply again, for every progressive application that follows (if necessary).
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ZacharyB
QUOTE (Po22 @ Sep 27 2008, 01:48 AM) *
Please apply for Stories and Poem if it's a story. There's a link somewhere explaining all this, lemme go find it.

QUOTE
Greetings aspiring writers! Before applying to the Sal's Realm Newspaper, we ask that you read this topic in its entirety, and follow the guidelines that it provides. Doing so will make the application process much easier for both of us, and will provide you with some necessary information and helpful assistance. Good luck!

Please use the following format to apply:

1. Why I would like to join:

2. Desired section:

3. My experience:

4. My example:
1. Why would you like to join Sal's Newspaper?

This can be short and sweet. Simply put, just try to let us know what brings you to the newspaper. We appreciate your interest, and we'd like to hear about it.

2. What section would you like to join?

Please refer to the Section Head List in order to see the newspaper sections available for your application. When you choose which section to apply for, please include it in the topic description of your application. You may also want to take note of the corresponding section head because this person must review your application and determine whether or not to accept you. Upon acceptance to the paper, you are allowed to contribute to other sections, although you will be expected to focus most of your articles on the section into which you were accepted.

3. Do you have any experience?

Please provide us with a short description of any relevant experience you have had in this area. If you have written essays, drawn comics, worked on another newspaper, and anything else related, please indicate that for us.

4. Post an example of your work.

Probably the most important part of your application, you must provide us with an example of your own work. Naturally, the work you provide depends on what section you are applying for (i.e. a comic or a story for those respective sections). You may offer material from elsewhere on Sal's forums as an example of your work, but it must be relevant to the section you are applying to join. We are not very strict about the content, so if you have a written example that doesn't necessarily fall into the category of the section to which you are applying, it is not a big problem. The purpose of the example is for us to observe and evaluate your skill. Try not to post something too short, but a tremendously lengthy work is unnecessary. Your example will not be published in the paper, so keep that in mind.

Other Important Information:
  • An application containing several mistakes does not look good and is more likely to be rejected. Be patient with it, and we recommend that you use a word processing program to write it.
  • Only members of the Newspaper Staff can contribute to the paper. Therefore, you must apply and be accepted in order to do so.
  • If you are accepted, you will be given the permission mask required to see all of the Newspaper Sections, where the work gets done (normally within 24 hours of acceptance). You will no longer need to use the Guest Forums, and you will be expected to make contributions. Activity sweeps are performed on occasion and inactive staff members are removed.
  • If your application is denied, you may reapply once more immediately afterwards, but please take some time to evaluate where you went wrong, and request pointers if necessary. In the event that your second application is declined, you must wait at least one month before you can apply again, for every progressive application that follows (if necessary).
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Although this is in a story-type format, these types of stories are considered as mysteries to solve, using the information given in the story. Sort of like a very long riddle. That's my opinion on it, I'll ask Slashing if this is more something for his section.

I'm not sure if I understand your example, though. I'm not entirely clear on who did it. Did Miss Smith do it, and tried to set it up so it looked like she didn't do it, so she could steal Emerson's necklace? Does this mean Miss Smith is the one that gave the note to Emerson?
Rachel Elizabeth Dare
QUOTE (Buffalo @ Sep 27 2008, 09:19 PM) *
QUOTE (Po22 @ Sep 27 2008, 01:48 AM) *
Please apply for Stories and Poem if it's a story. There's a link somewhere explaining all this, lemme go find it.

QUOTE
Greetings aspiring writers! Before applying to the Sal's Realm Newspaper, we ask that you read this topic in its entirety, and follow the guidelines that it provides. Doing so will make the application process much easier for both of us, and will provide you with some necessary information and helpful assistance. Good luck!

Please use the following format to apply:

1. Why I would like to join:

2. Desired section:

3. My experience:

4. My example:
1. Why would you like to join Sal's Newspaper?

This can be short and sweet. Simply put, just try to let us know what brings you to the newspaper. We appreciate your interest, and we'd like to hear about it.

2. What section would you like to join?

Please refer to the Section Head List in order to see the newspaper sections available for your application. When you choose which section to apply for, please include it in the topic description of your application. You may also want to take note of the corresponding section head because this person must review your application and determine whether or not to accept you. Upon acceptance to the paper, you are allowed to contribute to other sections, although you will be expected to focus most of your articles on the section into which you were accepted.

3. Do you have any experience?

Please provide us with a short description of any relevant experience you have had in this area. If you have written essays, drawn comics, worked on another newspaper, and anything else related, please indicate that for us.

4. Post an example of your work.

Probably the most important part of your application, you must provide us with an example of your own work. Naturally, the work you provide depends on what section you are applying for (i.e. a comic or a story for those respective sections). You may offer material from elsewhere on Sal's forums as an example of your work, but it must be relevant to the section you are applying to join. We are not very strict about the content, so if you have a written example that doesn't necessarily fall into the category of the section to which you are applying, it is not a big problem. The purpose of the example is for us to observe and evaluate your skill. Try not to post something too short, but a tremendously lengthy work is unnecessary. Your example will not be published in the paper, so keep that in mind.

Other Important Information:
  • An application containing several mistakes does not look good and is more likely to be rejected. Be patient with it, and we recommend that you use a word processing program to write it.
  • Only members of the Newspaper Staff can contribute to the paper. Therefore, you must apply and be accepted in order to do so.
  • If you are accepted, you will be given the permission mask required to see all of the Newspaper Sections, where the work gets done (normally within 24 hours of acceptance). You will no longer need to use the Guest Forums, and you will be expected to make contributions. Activity sweeps are performed on occasion and inactive staff members are removed.
  • If your application is denied, you may reapply once more immediately afterwards, but please take some time to evaluate where you went wrong, and request pointers if necessary. In the event that your second application is declined, you must wait at least one month before you can apply again, for every progressive application that follows (if necessary).
~


Although this is in a story-type format, these types of stories are considered as mysteries to solve, using the information given in the story. Sort of like a very long riddle. That's my opinion on it, I'll ask Slashing if this is more something for his section.

I'm not sure if I understand your example, though. I'm not entirely clear on who did it. Did Miss Smith do it, and tried to set it up so it looked like she didn't do it, so she could steal Emerson's necklace? Does this mean Miss Smith is the one that gave the note to Emerson?


Yup! It only made her plan worse because Mrs. Emerson hired a bodyguard, but as we were seeing the riddle in Mr. Detective's point, It wasn't actually the whole story, Of course, If I put the while story, everyone would know, but the only part that I was talking about is Mrs. Emerson didn't really want to show the necklace off, Miss Smith forced Mrs. Emerson to let her wear it, as them being colleagues and all..
ZacharyB
Works for me. Slashing is yet to post whether this is his section or not but I'll assume it's mine. Accepted.
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