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I'm back! biggrin.gif

1. Why I would like to join:
I suppose I'm honing my storywriting skills, and doing it in the Paper may help. Would be a fun experience to do in my free time.
2. Desired section:
Stories and Poems is my desired section.
3. My experience:
I've written several stories in the Story Mat. Wrote for a school paper for a year. Currently hosting a Roleplay.
4. My example:
Introductionary story to the Roleplay, Silver Dawn
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It is the year 1803 in the lands of Gielenor. Nine years before, a Spanish explorer arrived on the shores of our lands, bringing gifts, weaponry, and excellent new ship designs. Now, nine years later, they're back. Adventurers on Karamjan ferry docks saw a ship in the fog... and another, and another. An armada of ships. The unorganized Karamja and it's pirates fell in less than a day.

Sometime later, a Spanish warsloop, thinking it could take Karamja's neighbor, Thorgie Hills, sailed into Frelia bay and was blasted to tinderwood by waiting magi. The Spanish armada then fell back to Karamja, and islands further out in the Nearch sea, ones that Gielenor's adventurers had not discovered.

Thorgie hills, at that time, was developing ship building. Infact, they have studied this so much, the craftsmenship of the builders rivaled current vessels in England. Thorgie hills had a small fleet, which they pitted against the Spanish armada. Using Guerilla tactics, they sunk several small warships. However, their luck went awry when the Spanish flagship sailed up to the little fleet. It's thick hulls repelled cannonballs. The Thorgie fleet was all but wiped out. Shipbuilders were racing to create new vessels.

Shortly afterwards, the Silver Dawn (crownship of Aquilia) with the royal fleet, arrived from it's trip from Mos Le' Harmless. The captain turned back to Mos Le' Harmless after surveying the situation. The Aquilian fleet was too small to battle Spain. Aquilia turned to the adventurers of the lands to help.

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Po22
Aquillia? Isn't that the little people from MIB?

And I would think that a completed rising action and climax would or should be in order. Your story has no characters, its short and does the complicated task of combining Runescape and the real world.

Just seems rushed and weak.
Click This
I suppose I can write something on the spot. I had a hard time finding an example. bleh.gif
SlashingUK
Well, you can write; I only noticed one grammatical error in the whole piece. It's not so much of a story though, but for an application, I think it's good enough. Accepted.

To my esteemed colleagues on the Newspaper staff - if you should see an application requiring my attention (or that of any other section head) do please bring it to my (their) attention. I'm sorry it took so long to get around to accepting this, but I didn't even realise it was pending!
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