Full Version: Corrupt Dragon Plate (wings (pen Drawing))
Did this during school today.
Handsome little skills you have there (
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But seriously, you've got good talent. Specifically on dragon platebodies, since this is very similar to the actual thing, and the items are in the right place. 9/10 (do u have one)>
)But seriously, you've got good talent. Specifically on dragon platebodies, since this is very similar to the actual thing, and the items are in the right place. 9/10 (do u have one)>
QUOTE (Magic of Woodcut @ May 21 2009, 06:04 PM) 
Handsome little skills you have there ()
But seriously, you've got good talent. Specifically on dragon platebodies, since this is very similar to the actual thing, and the items are in the right place. 9/10 (do u have one)>
)But seriously, you've got good talent. Specifically on dragon platebodies, since this is very similar to the actual thing, and the items are in the right place. 9/10 (do u have one)>
I've had one yes, but then the price got flushed down the pooper and i sold for a while
might get again soon
And thanks
Dude thats awesome. I like the spikes on the shoulders and the front.
Sorry my damn screen was small. DUDE THAT'S AWESOME!
QUOTE (Magic of Woodcut @ May 21 2009, 06:14 PM)
Sorry my damn screen was small. DUDE THAT'S AWESOME!
ROFL thanks, got any ideas for tomorrows st00f? lol
the front veiw look like a face XD
Wow thats awsome 
Maybe add some more parts to the armour, make a full person type thing?
Maybe add some more parts to the armour, make a full person type thing?
I like your drawing style it looks pretty cool. 
Nice idea with the wings btw i think it would be awesome if d plate actually had them lol. Oh and how bored where you in school that day?
Nice idea with the wings btw i think it would be awesome if d plate actually had them lol. Oh and how bored where you in school that day?
QUOTE (hugomon3 @ May 24 2009, 01:07 AM)
I like your drawing style it looks pretty cool. Nice idea with the wings btw i think it would be awesome if d plate actually had them lol. Oh and how bored where you in school that day?
Nice idea with the wings btw i think it would be awesome if d plate actually had them lol. Oh and how bored where you in school that day? School in general is a bore lol, if i had a steady flow of ideas i would draw something like this every day, only thing is i can never come up with anything.
Any suggestions are open
Again, good, not great or awesome.
Like I said in the other topic, work on shading, depth, etc.
One more thing bothering me: the wing structure makes no sense.
Why?
It looks exactly the same on the front and back side.
You tried to make bird-like wings there since you tried to simulate feathers. It just doesn't work like that on a massive platebody, try bat wings or something or actualy wings from a dragon.
Another thing: the shoulderplates. You see, shoulders are right next to your body, not 2 inches removed from them. Therefore I find it cruel that you torture the poor wearer of this suit by disrupting his shoulder from his body like that. The opening hole should be connected to the body, and should not be in an almost quadratic structure like that. Rotate it a little sideways and put it closer to the body and you're fine.
The rest of it is good, pretty well drawn.
Like I said in the other topic, work on shading, depth, etc.
One more thing bothering me: the wing structure makes no sense.
Why?
It looks exactly the same on the front and back side.
You tried to make bird-like wings there since you tried to simulate feathers. It just doesn't work like that on a massive platebody, try bat wings or something or actualy wings from a dragon.
Another thing: the shoulderplates. You see, shoulders are right next to your body, not 2 inches removed from them. Therefore I find it cruel that you torture the poor wearer of this suit by disrupting his shoulder from his body like that. The opening hole should be connected to the body, and should not be in an almost quadratic structure like that. Rotate it a little sideways and put it closer to the body and you're fine.
The rest of it is good, pretty well drawn.
QUOTE (Toulouse @ May 24 2009, 03:55 PM)
Again, good, not great or awesome.
Like I said in the other topic, work on shading, depth, etc.
One more thing bothering me: the wing structure makes no sense.
Why?
It looks exactly the same on the front and back side.
You tried to make bird-like wings there since you tried to simulate feathers. It just doesn't work like that on a massive platebody, try bat wings or something or actualy wings from a dragon.
Another thing: the shoulderplates. You see, shoulders are right next to your body, not 2 inches removed from them. Therefore I find it cruel that you torture the poor wearer of this suit by disrupting his shoulder from his body like that. The opening hole should be connected to the body, and should not be in an almost quadratic structure like that. Rotate it a little sideways and put it closer to the body and you're fine.
The rest of it is good, pretty well drawn.
Like I said in the other topic, work on shading, depth, etc.
One more thing bothering me: the wing structure makes no sense.
Why?
It looks exactly the same on the front and back side.
You tried to make bird-like wings there since you tried to simulate feathers. It just doesn't work like that on a massive platebody, try bat wings or something or actualy wings from a dragon.
Another thing: the shoulderplates. You see, shoulders are right next to your body, not 2 inches removed from them. Therefore I find it cruel that you torture the poor wearer of this suit by disrupting his shoulder from his body like that. The opening hole should be connected to the body, and should not be in an almost quadratic structure like that. Rotate it a little sideways and put it closer to the body and you're fine.
The rest of it is good, pretty well drawn.
The Shoulder would be inside the pad, not right in the hole, so the wearer will be fine.
Concept drawing are also meant to be direct on, if it wasnt a concept piece, i would not label it so.
And, the wings are not meant to simulate feathers. Logically, something like this would never fly anyways, unless jet propelled. but this is based on middle age and therefore, there is no jetpacks.
And the shading is based on the sun being in the top left. just btw.
In my opinion you did buddy shading (or whatever you call it) and I can't see a directional light source really. You shaded on about every side.
Putting the shoulder parts a little lower would seem a lot more comfortable to me then.
They do have a feathery structure though, which does absolutely not fit with the whole 'dragon' idea.
Irrelevant. That feathery structure would never even fit to the top thingy they're attached to.
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The Shoulder would be inside the pad, not right in the hole, so the wearer will be fine.
Putting the shoulder parts a little lower would seem a lot more comfortable to me then.
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And, the wings are not meant to simulate feathers
They do have a feathery structure though, which does absolutely not fit with the whole 'dragon' idea.
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Logically, something like this would never fly anyways, unless jet propelled. but this is based on middle age and therefore, there is no jetpacks.
Irrelevant. That feathery structure would never even fit to the top thingy they're attached to.
love: Back, shoulder guards and wing design
Hate: Feather design and lower front plate
Hate: Feather design and lower front plate
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