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If you want a better template, here's a few extra things you could add:
-Appearance
-Clothing/Armor (which could be part of Appearance)
-History (it just helps with people getting to understand the person, in my opinion)
-Weapons (though that might be part of the "Three Items")
-You might want "Age" in there.
For the sake of Leo, you might want to add "Dwarf" to the races. Also, you might want to delve deeper into the story--you're getting the main point across, but it still lacks anything that would pull someone in. Another thing that could be helpful is to offer people to suggest/create races (part of what I was saying above with Dwarves)
I'm not sure, but are people allowed to be more than just a Warrior, Wizard, or Ranger (AKA can they be melee-mage, range-melee, etc)?
And I think it might just be worded weirdly, but are you saying each member of the RP can only have two characters? Because it sounds almost as if you're saying there can only be two RPers in the RP.
-Appearance
-Clothing/Armor (which could be part of Appearance)
-History (it just helps with people getting to understand the person, in my opinion)
-Weapons (though that might be part of the "Three Items")
-You might want "Age" in there.
For the sake of Leo, you might want to add "Dwarf" to the races. Also, you might want to delve deeper into the story--you're getting the main point across, but it still lacks anything that would pull someone in. Another thing that could be helpful is to offer people to suggest/create races (part of what I was saying above with Dwarves)
I'm not sure, but are people allowed to be more than just a Warrior, Wizard, or Ranger (AKA can they be melee-mage, range-melee, etc)?
And I think it might just be worded weirdly, but are you saying each member of the RP can only have two characters? Because it sounds almost as if you're saying there can only be two RPers in the RP.
I didn't know trolls came out to these parts.
QUOTE (bennycool122 @ May 23 2009, 05:08 AM) 
he has expert swimming and boating skills
Erm.. Why did the boat crash then?
(elf, human or gnome)Race: Elf
3 of the items you have after the shipwreck: A bow, 24 arrows, and his pants.
Age: 34
2 powers: None, he uses his bow & arrow. But he is very skilled with them.
Warrior/Wizard/Ranger: Ranger
Apperance: He has long blue hair (hangs down), green eyes, light blue skin, and black pants.
Other: He knew that they needed a bigger boat.
Smokey there was strong winds, a storm and sharp rocks! how can anybody avoid it anyway..
Your person is accepted =)
and i might not be here allways cuz im in australia...
to the roleplaying!
"hmm." said benny looking around the beach. He heard loud yells and then followed them to find another elf that was stranded on the island.
Your person is accepted =)
and i might not be here allways cuz im in australia...
to the roleplaying!
"hmm." said benny looking around the beach. He heard loud yells and then followed them to find another elf that was stranded on the island.
Appearence/clothing/armour: Tall, six foot four. Light cloth, clothing, dark, almost black, colored, long sleeved pants and shirt. The shirt can be unbottoned in the front if it gets hot.
(elf, human, dwarf or gnome)Race: Elf.
Name: John (he hides his last name, to mask the fact that he is the last of his clan, who were renowned for their ability to control Water and Fire).
3 of the items you have after the shipwreck: A Katana, a Broadsword, and his clothing (I assume that this would count as one artical?). If not, his pants.
2 powers: The power to control Water, and the Power to control Fire.
Warrior/Wizard/Ranger: Wizard, and to a much lesser extent, warrior. He relies on his powers over Water, and to a lesser extent, Fire, to protect him. He is not a very good fighter, but he carries to blades to hide his Magical powers, so that he can surprise an enemy when they least expect it.
Other: The sole surviver of his clan of elves. Early on, his ability to contol Water, and Fire, were noticed. He was sent away from town under apprentiseship to a powerful wizard. However, his clan was never very big, and thus, when war came, was easily wiped out. He was lucky enough to have been sent out of town at the time. When he returned, he found nothing but burned out huts, and the remains of the majority of his clan. He believes himself to be the sole-surviver of his clan, however, there were a few bodies he could not account for. What happened to them are unknown, perhaps they were out of town when the raid happened. Perhaps they were the reason the raid happened, or perhaps he just did not find the bodies. Whatever the reason, he is the only surviver of his clan, so far.
He does his best to not show his ability to control Fire, with water, he is less subtle, but still tries not to be very obvious about his power over water.
~John
(elf, human, dwarf or gnome)Race: Elf.
Name: John (he hides his last name, to mask the fact that he is the last of his clan, who were renowned for their ability to control Water and Fire).
3 of the items you have after the shipwreck: A Katana, a Broadsword, and his clothing (I assume that this would count as one artical?). If not, his pants.
2 powers: The power to control Water, and the Power to control Fire.
Warrior/Wizard/Ranger: Wizard, and to a much lesser extent, warrior. He relies on his powers over Water, and to a lesser extent, Fire, to protect him. He is not a very good fighter, but he carries to blades to hide his Magical powers, so that he can surprise an enemy when they least expect it.
Other: The sole surviver of his clan of elves. Early on, his ability to contol Water, and Fire, were noticed. He was sent away from town under apprentiseship to a powerful wizard. However, his clan was never very big, and thus, when war came, was easily wiped out. He was lucky enough to have been sent out of town at the time. When he returned, he found nothing but burned out huts, and the remains of the majority of his clan. He believes himself to be the sole-surviver of his clan, however, there were a few bodies he could not account for. What happened to them are unknown, perhaps they were out of town when the raid happened. Perhaps they were the reason the raid happened, or perhaps he just did not find the bodies. Whatever the reason, he is the only surviver of his clan, so far.
He does his best to not show his ability to control Fire, with water, he is less subtle, but still tries not to be very obvious about his power over water.
~John
What does this have to do with magic and elves and all that?
QUOTE (John Adams @ May 24 2009, 12:59 AM)
Appearence/clothing/armour: Tall, six foot four. Light cloth, clothing, dark, almost black, colored, long sleeved pants and shirt. The shirt can be unbottoned in the front if it gets hot.
(elf, human, dwarf or gnome)Race: Elf.
Name: John (he hides his last name, to mask the fact that he is the last of his clan, who were renowned for their ability to control Water and Fire).
3 of the items you have after the shipwreck: A Katana, a Broadsword, and his clothing (I assume that this would count as one artical?). If not, his pants.
2 powers: The power to control Water, and the Power to control Fire.
Warrior/Wizard/Ranger: Wizard, and to a much lesser extent, warrior. He relies on his powers over Water, and to a lesser extent, Fire, to protect him. He is not a very good fighter, but he carries to blades to hide his Magical powers, so that he can surprise an enemy when they least expect it.
Other: The sole surviver of his clan of elves. Early on, his ability to contol Water, and Fire, were noticed. He was sent away from town under apprentiseship to a powerful wizard. However, his clan was never very big, and thus, when war came, was easily wiped out. He was lucky enough to have been sent out of town at the time. When he returned, he found nothing but burned out huts, and the remains of the majority of his clan. He believes himself to be the sole-surviver of his clan, however, there were a few bodies he could not account for. What happened to them are unknown, perhaps they were out of town when the raid happened. Perhaps they were the reason the raid happened, or perhaps he just did not find the bodies. Whatever the reason, he is the only surviver of his clan, so far.
He does his best to not show his ability to control Fire, with water, he is less subtle, but still tries not to be very obvious about his power over water.
~John
(elf, human, dwarf or gnome)Race: Elf.
Name: John (he hides his last name, to mask the fact that he is the last of his clan, who were renowned for their ability to control Water and Fire).
3 of the items you have after the shipwreck: A Katana, a Broadsword, and his clothing (I assume that this would count as one artical?). If not, his pants.
2 powers: The power to control Water, and the Power to control Fire.
Warrior/Wizard/Ranger: Wizard, and to a much lesser extent, warrior. He relies on his powers over Water, and to a lesser extent, Fire, to protect him. He is not a very good fighter, but he carries to blades to hide his Magical powers, so that he can surprise an enemy when they least expect it.
Other: The sole surviver of his clan of elves. Early on, his ability to contol Water, and Fire, were noticed. He was sent away from town under apprentiseship to a powerful wizard. However, his clan was never very big, and thus, when war came, was easily wiped out. He was lucky enough to have been sent out of town at the time. When he returned, he found nothing but burned out huts, and the remains of the majority of his clan. He believes himself to be the sole-surviver of his clan, however, there were a few bodies he could not account for. What happened to them are unknown, perhaps they were out of town when the raid happened. Perhaps they were the reason the raid happened, or perhaps he just did not find the bodies. Whatever the reason, he is the only surviver of his clan, so far.
He does his best to not show his ability to control Fire, with water, he is less subtle, but still tries not to be very obvious about his power over water.
~John
Accepted and nice other part. Its a part for what you can do and your history! Great work on that complex history that i cannot even understand
acouple more people and the roleplaying will start!
OoC: Wait.. Your name aint even in the app,
whatever, my guys name is captain balls.
IC: Balls, got his bow and arrow and shot himself in the head. He couldnt stand being on an stranded island.
OoC: Im dead, take my bow, arrows, and pants if you want.
whatever, my guys name is captain balls.
IC: Balls, got his bow and arrow and shot himself in the head. He couldnt stand being on an stranded island.
OoC: Im dead, take my bow, arrows, and pants if you want.
QUOTE (Smokey The Win @ May 25 2009, 11:27 AM)
OoC: Wait.. Your name aint even in the app,
whatever, my guys name is captain balls.
IC: Balls, got his bow and arrow and shot himself in the head. He couldnt stand being on an stranded island.
OoC: Im dead, take my bow, arrows, and pants if you want.
whatever, my guys name is captain balls.
IC: Balls, got his bow and arrow and shot himself in the head. He couldnt stand being on an stranded island.
OoC: Im dead, take my bow, arrows, and pants if you want.
OoC:
suicide much? IC: Benny heard a bow being shot. He ran over to where Captain Balls was and healed him to life..
OoC: try harder i can use crystal magic to heal!
Name: Dritzfor Guritem
Appearence/clothing/armour: Leather bikers jacket, torn jeans, thick bear and sunglasses. Always has a cigar in his mouth
(elf, human, dwarf or gnome)Race: Dwarf
3 of the items you have after the shipwreck:
Box of cigars
Picture of his mammy
A rock from his homeland, Rockenthorfh
2 powers:
The power to make people's head explode by thinking
His hammer is made out of white hot fire
Warrior/Wizard/Ranger: Warrior
Other: Nope.
OoC: First roleplay. So tell me if I'm doing something wrong.
Appearence/clothing/armour: Leather bikers jacket, torn jeans, thick bear and sunglasses. Always has a cigar in his mouth
(elf, human, dwarf or gnome)Race: Dwarf
3 of the items you have after the shipwreck:
Box of cigars
Picture of his mammy
A rock from his homeland, Rockenthorfh
2 powers:
The power to make people's head explode by thinking
His hammer is made out of white hot fire
Warrior/Wizard/Ranger: Warrior
Other: Nope.
OoC: First roleplay. So tell me if I'm doing something wrong.
Balls, angry at the elf shoots him and himself. He also uses the arrows to chop himself into many pieces before he dies.
QUOTE (Squiggle @ May 26 2009, 02:34 PM)
Name: Dritzfor Guritem
Appearence/clothing/armour: Leather bikers jacket, torn jeans, thick bear and sunglasses. Always has a cigar in his mouth
(elf, human, dwarf or gnome)Race: Dwarf
3 of the items you have after the shipwreck:
Box of cigars
Picture of his mammy
A rock from his homeland, Rockenthorfh
2 powers:
The power to make people's head explode by thinking
His hammer is made out of white hot fire
Warrior/Wizard/Ranger: Warrior
Other: Nope.
OoC: First roleplay. So tell me if I'm doing something wrong.
Appearence/clothing/armour: Leather bikers jacket, torn jeans, thick bear and sunglasses. Always has a cigar in his mouth
(elf, human, dwarf or gnome)Race: Dwarf
3 of the items you have after the shipwreck:
Box of cigars
Picture of his mammy
A rock from his homeland, Rockenthorfh
2 powers:
The power to make people's head explode by thinking
His hammer is made out of white hot fire
Warrior/Wizard/Ranger: Warrior
Other: Nope.
OoC: First roleplay. So tell me if I'm doing something wrong.
OoC:heh cigar allways in mouth.... the other could show why he has a cigar!
and do you have a shorter name?anway your aloud to start rping now =D
IC: Benny hears more yells and finds a dwarf with a cigar in his mouth.
"whats your name?"
OoC: Call me Dritty, maybe, or Drit. Whatever one you prefer.
IC: The Dwarf looked up at the human with a grimace on his bruised face.
''Dritzfor, but my friends call me Drit.'' He said,coldly.
''Nice to meet you, Drit.'' Said Benny.
''That's Dritzfor to you.'' He said angrily.
Ooc: First rp bit ever! yay!
IC: The Dwarf looked up at the human with a grimace on his bruised face.
''Dritzfor, but my friends call me Drit.'' He said,coldly.
''Nice to meet you, Drit.'' Said Benny.
''That's Dritzfor to you.'' He said angrily.
Ooc: First rp bit ever! yay!
(10 days later)
"drit why do you allways have a cigar in your mouth?" said benny to the dwarf. "Anyway your cigar stock is running low!"
He looked at the dwarfs sad face.
"hmm... ill try to make some more out of these trees."
(10 more days later)
"dang i keep on breaking them when i try to carve them!" benny said while he was looking around the place. "theres hardly any trees near us from all these cigars.."
"drit why do you allways have a cigar in your mouth?" said benny to the dwarf. "Anyway your cigar stock is running low!"
He looked at the dwarfs sad face.
"hmm... ill try to make some more out of these trees."
(10 more days later)
"dang i keep on breaking them when i try to carve them!" benny said while he was looking around the place. "theres hardly any trees near us from all these cigars.."
The Dwarf sighed sadly. He walked over to the sea and pulled the cigar out of his mouth. He bounced it in his palm, and threw it as far as he could in the crystal ocean.
''No more cigars for me then.'' He said, with a puff.
''No more cigars for me then.'' He said, with a puff.
"hmm... we need to make a tent out of leaves.." says benny.
OoC: John hasnt talked in rp yet!
OoC: John hasnt talked in rp yet!
The dwarf eyed Benny.
''I'm no builder, but i'm guessing there are sticky leaves we could build a shelter with or something.'' He mumbled. He started to walk into the threatening, green overgrowth gesturing Benny to follow.
''I'm no builder, but i'm guessing there are sticky leaves we could build a shelter with or something.'' He mumbled. He started to walk into the threatening, green overgrowth gesturing Benny to follow.
As Benny was making a tent he heard rumbelling..
"whats that?" said benny as he followed the noice.
He saw heaps of leamurs dancing.
"i like to move it move it" they were saying.
Benny woke up.
"woah i had the wierdest dream EVER!
"whats that?" said benny as he followed the noice.
He saw heaps of leamurs dancing.
"i like to move it move it" they were saying.
Benny woke up.
"woah i had the wierdest dream EVER!
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