Could I possibly make a kit out of this? Maybe...Teh Mini Kit V2?

The whip is going the wrong way and he needs a face.
EDIT: Hands are pointing outwards, upper arms are too small and they seem to end at his waist and jut out again.

It doesn't matter what way the whip faces.

If there is a "way" then I guess he has disobeyed these so called rules

Right well bit small colours are okay, just keep practising, if you like going small, it will only get you so far. Try making you're pixels bigger everytime

Just noticed you wanted to make it into a kit, in that case it's pretty cute

Looks pretty cool, but i would actually make it a bit bigger so you can see the details better.

You are defaintly getting somewhere though

@Poke, i think the whip and hands are fine. A kit is a kit, so it's his decision on how he wants the people to look

Yeah...