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Poke
I finally finished all my homework so I decided to do a pixel to take my mind of school for a bit. tongue.gif
I've been working on this for about 2 hours so far.

Spidermike9
wow, cant wait to see the final.
Poke
QUOTE (Spidermike9 @ Jun 5 2009, 02:41 PM) *
wow, cant wait to see the final.


Thanks. smile.gif
V2, spent about 1 hour and 30 minutes adding windows and a road.


Any tips to make it look like the road isn't slanting downwards?
The grass made it look slightly better, but it's going to mean a lot more work.
prediter45
i like it cant wait to see the final product


maybe a more definde light source will help with the road
Balmung
QUOTE (Poke @ Jun 5 2009, 03:41 PM) *
QUOTE (Spidermike9 @ Jun 5 2009, 02:41 PM) *
wow, cant wait to see the final.


Thanks. smile.gif
V2, spent about 1 hour and 30 minutes adding windows and a road.


Any tips to make it look like the road isn't slanting downwards?
The grass made it look slightly better, but it's going to mean a lot more work.

change the angle of the stripes on the road.
Grimm
Looking nice so far. The structure of those two blocks on my left of the building (creating that gap), looks interesting. It's the road that stands out though (the lines that is). As you said, it does look like it's slanting downwards. Extend the inner side of the road stripe (closest to the building), so that it goes a tad further than the outer. I'll let a 'pro' if you might say, help seeing as I'm nothing of a citizen in these parts. There's another minor mistake that caught my eye:



You mucked up the line there slightly, nothing big, just noticeable to me. Otherwise, it's looking good.
Poke
QUOTE (Life @ Jun 6 2009, 11:03 AM) *
Looking nice so far. The structure of those two blocks on my left of the building (creating that gap), looks interesting. It's the road that stands out though (the lines that is). As you said, it does look like it's slanting downwards. Extend the inner side of the road stripe (closest to the building), so that it goes a tad further than the outer. I'll let a 'pro' if you might say, help seeing as I'm nothing of a citizen in these parts. There's another minor mistake that caught my eye:



You mucked up the line there slightly, nothing big, just noticeable to me. Otherwise, it's looking good.


Thanks for that. smile.gif
I think I've fixed the odd line.

I also tried to fix up the road stripes. I think it's done the trick, but I'm going to have to fiddle around with the placement to get it right.
Stinky Diver
The stripes on the left look alot better, but the ones on the right still look a little off to me.
prediter45
well its wshapng up






its gd to see people being a tad more active in the pixel section
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