i spent maybe 20 minutes on this lolz

It's good for a first, but a few things u could improve on:


:: When using pencil, its a good idea to clean up your lines when you get near the end of ur project.


:: some shading might help this guy also.

:: Last of all his clothing lacks life, the end of the sleeves and the bottom of the pants should be rounded to show perspective, but this isnt too noticeable to most people, although it would be a good idea to get in the hbit of.


Keep up the good work, cant wait to see wut will come up next.

thats not a chibi just so u know, but add some shading and dithering make sure you add a light source as well






























Seriously, go over your lines in pen or something.

Whats up with his teeth, looks sorta like a vampire, but if that's the style then I won't criticise it, and his right leg looks a little square compared to the other.
Its okay overall