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Easl


For pixel of the week
Dreaded
His left eye (for his point of view) is distorted.

I'm also not really liking the black outline around him.
Maybe clean that up a bit?

It's a good pixel, just has some flaws. happy.gif
Legend
Looks really great. You've done a good job with the lighting and the contrast.

One thing I think that can improve your pixels further would be smoothing out your lines. Your lines are clean but they could be smoothed to create a better effect.


Mine is the one on the right. I have smoothed the lines out on the knee and the back.

The lines are smoother and look better even without AA because there is a transition between the length of the lines. It's hard to explain so try putting the image onto paint and zooming in.


Here is an example of a curve. See how the lines go 3px -> 2px -> 1px? That's the transition.

It doesn't make the biggest difference but I think you're skillful enough to start paying attention to the smaller details.

Keep it up. happy.gif

EDIT: This doesn't just apply to outlines, but shading as well. Evenly distributed shades will look smoother than less controlled shadows.
Da names Medina
I agree, at some points of view he looks quite distorted. Otherwise, great pixel.

And the head looks distorted also, especially at the top right part. Hopefully you see that and fix it.
Easl
Thanks you the advice, I'm going to give it a try now
Zachh
This is pretty good, considering I dont see you around with many pixels (y)
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