Hi, I thought I'd write a story, because I have a deep interest into writing stories, so I thought I'd write this one.

Your writing skills seem pretty decent.

Just the storyline and plot aren't so original and more cliche.

Alright, I'm a bit confused. In one paragraph, you claim she lived a happy, bossy life in Keldagrim, but yet in the next one you claim that the dwarves want to take her from Varrock's palace?

No, I was saying that she lived a happy life in Varrock, but the Dwarves in Keldagrim didn't like her so much. So the Dwarves went to Varrock Palace to capture her...

By the way, Chapter One will be out soon.

After Princess Filiah had been captured, King Roald was wondering where he was going to get a soldier. He commanded his guards to go out into Gielinor looking for a good soldier who would be the right person for the job to rescue Filiah. Only one Warrior offered to help, who went by the name of Zuruh.

Zuruh was a skilled Warrior, and won every battle that ever happened, even the God Wars.
"King Roald," he said, "I will offer to help in this mission to rescue your daughter. I can even find some good friends who might want to be able to help me. I promise you, I will not let you down."
"You better hope you won't let me down," said King Roald. "If you do not find my daughter, you will be having a meeting with the Gallows. Go, now. Send word to me through a spell that you have found my daughter or if someone else has."

So, Zuruh was off on his adventure to rescue King Roald's daughter. Of course, he wouldn't be able to do this alone; he would have to find some friends to help him out with the task that he had to do.

He journeyed off to the Wizards' Tower, which was located just south of Draynor Village. There, he found an old friend, whose name was Elorin. He asked if Elorin could help him on the journey to rescue Princess Filiah. He accepted, and there were now two fighters of the team. Zuruh only needed to find one more fighter to help him, who practiced his Ranging skills a lot at the Ranging Guild.

This Ranger, who was very skilled with the bow, went by the name of Zanian. He too had accepted Zuruh's adventure on the quest to rescue Princess Filiah.

The recruiting was now over, and there were three skilled fighters: Zuruh, who was a Warrior, Elorin, who was a Wizard, and Zanian, who was a Ranger. Of course, they would face difficult tasks on the adventure, but since they were one of the most powerful fighters in the world, they could slip through any dangers that tried to challenge them. They now only had one main task to do: rescue Filiah.

Hmmm Prettey good writeing but not very good plot it seems to much like "Once upon a time" kinda story

The plot may be a little off, but I like the story the way it is, regardless of how strange the plot may be.

No offense to anyone, but if anyone asks me to change the plot, I'm not going to, because it's going to stay the way it is.