These are actually from an art project of mine, which if I can get a better digital camera, I hope to share with the online community. Now they aren't exactly tradiotional, but they follow the "5 7 5" rule.


The one above was written in red over an old, twisting tree. Bubbles hung in the smoke filled air and an orca danced playfully off to the side. Butterflies flocked near the orchids. I have been an a troubled state of mind and my imagination is the only real sanctuary I have to escape life. Irony is fun, isn't it?

The second may seem kind of cheesey, but it's some of the best advise in a nutshell you can give. Your avatars and signatures don't define you. Your family gives you a starting point, I suppose, if you're lucky to be blessed with a good family life. Your friends don't even have a say so, but I'm preaching to the choir.





Here's a couple lines, while at work,
that bred from a bad taste for beuracratic, 'everyone's the same' society,
and a hate for my job.





comment, ask if you want, and enjoy what little I have.
More to come.
No flames please.

They're pretty good, but the first one is much much better than the second two. Number two sounds too self-richeous and the third one is too angry. Truly great haikus (in my opinion) should convey peace and beauty. Good job though, I'd like to see some more of your work. Good luck!

Not bad. I liked the first one the best, though. I really don't have much to say, because I'm not really the poetry person.

I love the second one, honestly.

You should write more, i've recently gotten into haikus as well.

Don't limit yourself. Definitely keep an open mind. Thank you so much. :]

And thank you to everyone else. The other two were at work- a very negative energy.
There will be more to come shortly! And when I get a few things sorted out, I'll get up some essays and stories. :]