QUOTE (Warrior Zynk @ Jul 21 2009, 07:25 PM)

QUOTE (Balmung @ Jul 21 2009, 04:19 PM)

QUOTE (Warrior Zynk @ Jul 21 2009, 03:42 PM)

Well, here is an isometric pixelation of my Runescape characters head. I don't really know anything about pixeling. The one bane to starting any piece for me is getting the shape down, but as for shading I think I am OK... probably a little sub-par. That's what I think, though I will let you be the judge.

Head is quite fat.
needs some shading on the bandana.
He needs ears

That line under his eye is disturbing.
Needs less black outline.
This isn't Isometric.
So you're saying I should make the temples more closed inwards?
I did shade it to some extent, although elaborating how I should do it would help.
I suppose your saying that the ears are too small.
Only the outside of the image has a black outline. Unless you are hinting towards using no black outline at all.
Sorry... symmetrical was the word I was looking for (got a huge headache).
QUOTE ('Ej' date='Jul 21 2009 @ 03:30 PM')
The eye looks a little (Ok quite a bit) over saturated, and the head looks a little squashed and wide.
I have de-saturated the eyes, though when I make the head have less width it just looks weird.
I'll try working on it to satisfy your needs. Like I said though, my abilitys are pretty limited and I need FEEDBACK on how to do what you feel needs improvements.
Edit:

This does look a lot better. Thanks for the feedback!
What I meant about sharding the bandana was giving it a light source-- you already given it a pattern and texture--but how is the light hitting it as it wraps around his head?
He has ears now-- but they still need to be bigger.
And completely remove outlines from it-- makes it flow much better.
The eye is a bit big-- infact almost the wrong shape.
i'll post an example in a few.
EDIT:

that's about the shape I make my eyes--and remember--the eye isn't fully open-so the top bit of the pupil is covered by the lid.
edit--here's a head I did a while bad--for reference or w/e.