Home is where the heart is,
but when I knock on the door,
emptiness resounds inside me,
another failed escape.

Love is where the heart is,
yet when I kiss my love,
sadness crushes my pleasure,
she too shall someday die.

Heaven is where the heart is,
but when I dream of heaven,
I'm filled with anger and jealousy,
Locked outside the gates.

Music is where the heart is,
but when I listen to my favorites,
I'm struck with embarrassment,
This is nowhere near mainstream.

Life is where the heart is,
yet when I look around,
I am mocked by shame,
My heart is not this cruel.

My chest is where my heart is,
but whenever I think to check,
I'm overcome by terror,
What if it's not there?

Perhaps Hell is where the heart is,
In empty and silent streets,
The the glaring streetlight of your life long gone.
No passion, no extravagance, just your thoughts, yourself,
Your heart.

O_o

I'm speechless. There is really nothing to say about this poem. Its grammar, puctuation and spelling are flawless. However, I thought in a poem that the beginning of every sentence had to be capitalized. This poem really does teach you something about life, that not every cloud you see in life has a silver lining. Hell probably is where the heart is, you're isolated from everything, the terror and pain you've faced in life. The heart stores it all.

Yay this is my second post on the forum! First post on this thread!

P.S. I'm really bad at rating thigs. I don't really think that was constructive criticism and i don't think that any will be given due to the fact I cannot spot any errors in you're spelling, grammar, etc. The plot is very easy to figure out, that Hell is the place where you're heart truly is, because of the pain and emptiness you feel in life. The format is great, you use paragraphs between each idea, but I think you're supposed to capitalize the first letter of each sentence. <----(that would be my only thing to point out) Overall,

Plot:10/10
Grammar:10/10
Capitalization:8.5/10
Spelling:10/10
Format:9/10

Add them up, I'd rate this poem: 9.3/10

Incredible work!!!!

-Wabbit ^--^
( ' . ' )<-----------weird rabbit

10/10

I think you portrayed the message really well, and I like it.

Beautiful. It was truly amazing. I hate to say negative feedback, but you shouldn't feel that don't like music because it's not mainstream, music is all opinion. But again, I loved the poem. I look forward to your next spectacular poem.

Wondeful... That's the only thing I can say bur I type this sentence too so I don't have a one-word post.