I am all that is,
all that will never be.
I have gone on
to behold what you will never see.
In the arms of death,
all becomes clear.
There is no need to worry,
no need to fear.
Do not mourn,
do not weep.
I have moved on
to an eternal sleep.
My time is finally over
and even as my body decays,
I know that I will miss you
in a million ways.
Just something I came up with :-)
Feedback is appreciated!
Full Version: In The Arms Of Death
Decent rhyming scheme. Fit the theme very well. Not much of a poetry critic. You get the point. Yes, it's good. 
It feels like you kind of throw the rhythm off in the third to last line.
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