A Short Story I Wrote Whilst I was Leveling my Fishing, My First Sal's Story. Please Comment.

The Life of a Fisherman

On a cold, chilly day in Runescape, I was fishing in Draynor whilst skillers cut willow logs. I was feeling rather pleased with myself having completed Dragon Slayer one hour previously. I had just got my fishing level to 20 when the Mysterious Old Man came up to me and said "Stegoslash, do you care for a quick death", and he shot a fire wave at me, but i jumped out of the way and it hit one of the willow trees, instantly incinerating it and causing several axes to burst into flames, killing the people holding them.

Then, a level 3 ran into Draynor village singing "You are all noobs, i have level 2 woodcutting, i own u all!" I looked at the Mysterious Old Man and he looked at me, and together we cast a dragon wave (fictional spell that is more powerful than a fire wave) that instantly killed the noob, he didn't even have time to scream.

The Mysterious Old Man looked at me and said "Thank you Stegoslash, Goodbye", and with that, he leaped into the water, never to be seen again, or will he been seen again, only my next tale can tell....

A good start but ultimately, not really a story. More of a synopsis.
Try making it longer. Get rid of the noob, since noob stories fail here and fix the two mistakes
singin- singing
Thankyou- thank you
gl

I will make the corrections-thanks for pointing them out, but it was only intended to be short, basic and based around what might happn in rs life.

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Read the guide, it'll help. You nonchalantly ignored the basics of story-writing. That, Stegoslash, was not a story.

Though you probably have some potential. At least you can type.

You have much potential to gain but right now it seems as you don't even have a plot. The Noob that you mentioned is just a filler and you have a bit of MSLAG in your story as well. Please check out the stickied guide as it can probably help you alot.

That story was a good attempt, but it was very short, and it had nothing to do with fishing, except for the first sentence or two, which to be honest, was the reason why I read this.
Next time you're going to write a story, just make it longer, and either make it have more to do with the title, or make the title have more to do with the story.