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Before you start posting saying 0 em ghee pixel girlfriend? or anything like that, i just wanted you to know I made this because of my passion of writing.
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From pixel to pixel
She is a RuneScape Queen
Something about her is so special
She is my RS Dream

Wearing her Purple Elegant and Farming SkillCape
Where ever she's at she's holding her rake
I always see her there
That makes me seem that girl
Is my RS Dream

Teleporting to Lumbridge, Varrock, and Falador
There's something about that girl that i just adore
Do I have to say more?
This girl that I see
Is my RS Dream
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So what do you think about my poem?
(It is my first poem about RuneScape so don't be harsh)
There ya go!

Very nice. It's short, simple, and to the point!

It also rhymes very well, although inconsistently.

Nice job

haha thats well good, i enjoyed reading it, i liked how it was about a girl on runescape haha, you gonna write another soon if so i would like to read it

And this is suppose to be? Are you dating someone on RS? Or what?

wait..... wasnt this taken from library?

You need to find a pattern for your rhymes like ABBA AABB ABBA (being AA/BB the rhyming words). The poem wasn't bad, though.