Blown Away In Smoke

My friend said he was smoking,
I thought don’t worry, he’s only joking.

When I saw him having a smiley face,
He pleaded with me not to nag.

I asked him why? He said “Keep up my popularity status”.
I laughed and I said “Oh, Laters”.

My only wish? I wish he wouldn’t be a smoker.
If he carries on he’ll only be mediocre.

Spending all his hard earn cash,
He’ll end up just like total trash.

He said he was quitting, He only had the seven.
I said either stop completely or you end up there in heaven.

Short and sweet his life will be,
At his funeral I told him “See”.

My friend will never smoke again,
That is true because he is dead.

Written by Smiffy, 20th May 2009

Eh, it's only okay. The meter isn't really on right.

I wasn't really meant as an A-Level poem anyway. I wrote it in about 5 minutes with fury in my body after being told and finding out first hand that my best friend was smoking. It was a shock in the system, I thought it wasn't bad when I wrote it but I'm pleased it's ok.

Yours Sincerely,
Smiffy

I really don't want to offend, but I see you don't think it's perfect so:

(I'm not giving CC) Really bad.

its deep i can understand your emotions!

love,matt