V.2



V.1


I finally, finally, FINALLY made a new fake. Rate, hate,

EDIT: Okay, Version 2 up.

Flaws fixed in Version 2:
-No longer is there a dearth of image on the quest finish scroll.
-I slightly fixed the run and prayer icons

-4 I can spot a couple of flaws and I really dislike the main thing in the center of the window (you know what I am talking about, it's really wrong)
-1 it's not a very effort-taking fake
+2 originality and idea

7/10

You can spot a couple of flaws: which ones? I'd like to fix them.

And yes, I know that you're talking about the quest finish scroll, but how is it "really wrong?"


True.


Thanks.

the run energy button, might wanna fix that
and omg you haxxed my qp


edit: whoopz forgot my ratings

-2 for the run energy+sum tab+the 9 being cut off a bit
-1 for having no items in the inventory, makes it look to easy
-1 for the scroll, it was the most important part and it was done poorly, sorry

6/10
nice ideas

-King

The finished quest scroll is the most important part of the fake and it is reeeally badly done so I took 2-3 points just on it. Also it seems to me that the text on it is a bit more on the right than what it should be.. Maybe not for -4 overall but the fake most honestly deserves a 7/10, maybe 7.5.. Just like I'd say mine is 7-8, while others rated it 9

-1 Run icon + summoning icon are misaligned and the 9 in your prayer is cut off
-0.5 No work in inventory. You could've made something that relates to the C.I.A..
-0.5 No picture on the side of the quest scroll.

8/10 Good job

-1 none of you saw that the dot in the centre of the minimap is microscopic
-1 no picture on the quest screen
-1 9 in prayer badly done
-1 100 in run energy is really bad
-0 Whos jfk?
-0 could of done something that relates to hacking in skills

If i started at 5 like i do to most people you would now be on 1/10.

So ill start at 7.5 -> 3.5/10

Youve done way better and you know you can do better but some of these flaws are appauling, i mean does the 9 really look right or the 100?

Im only being harsh because you should be more experienced now to notice the flaws like that. Just take a bit more care on the next fake instead of rushing to the upload button.

The idea had a lot more potential than you gave it as well. Maybe make a future fake with soemthing to do with this like actually hacking the computer or CIA in a building.

Heres my score system

Bla bla bla...bla bla blablabla ba +1
Blabla blabla blaaaa -1
Bla Bla Blaarrr +2

7/10


Add a picture to the scroll

JFK. John F. Kennedy. I hope you were joking.

7/10 for reasons above, and also i don't think anyone mentioned this, but the white dot on the minimap is too small

Good idea though, i like the rewards

The energy meter's a little bit awkward. Other than that pretty good job.

Nope wernt joking . Thought he might of meant JLK as well

History or w/e isnt my strong subject

You know, I got the idea from an old Foxtrot comic strip--Jason (the genius) had gone to this Science Camp or something, and one kid was hacking into the CIA's JFK assassination files.


I love history. And who's JLK?

Justipher Luther King Probably not right name and if it is spelling is awful


Geography > History.

Edit: next time you wish to add run energy or prayer why not just take actual screenshots ingame?

took 2 seconds so you can happily use if you want.

nice job i like it