Version 2:



FIXED: Updated Minimap, Bullets in equip tab, Failed attempt to remedy the sniper rifle in equip tab, new chatbox, messed up looking neck also fixed.

Version 1:



It turned out pretty nicely, in my point of view.

Rate _/10 and constructive criticism please.

Amazing overall, 9/10.

-1 because the Sniper in the inventory seems a bit odd.

Other than that, outstanding.

~D

Not bad







First glance 7/10
End rating 7/10 (starting at 5)

To add to Gonza Man's rating: could you be talking to the person through Clan Chat? Private Messages? Could you add at the top "you turn on the walkie-talkie/cell phone/radio?" The arrows slot should hold bullets, probably...

@ Gonza: when you recommended him adding a target to the minimap, since he's on the second floor, wouldn't it be a flaw to have a dot that's on the ground? Just wondering...

He could make a symbol A lot of people have done it so theres a flag on the minimap where the target is or a crosshair. Just looks good imo ^^

edit: he didnt put himself on the minimap by the looks of things

double edit: He did but its a black dot

Ah. Well, the black dot could be a new one. TBFL's "Death" NPC has a new dot. The black dot could represent a sniper or something.

The stance was actually a "Talk-to Zombie head" Stance. I just edited the arms and stuff.

O_o the head DOES look messed up.

You should put a number on the bullets in the equip screen.

The rifle (not the icon on the equip screen) looks good.

The icons on the equip screen don't look very Runescapish...


8/10

How do you make good inventory fakes
Mine all suck.

I lol'ed nice one

How do you make good inventory fakes
Mine all suck.

Your fakes are always amazing.

• Nice Minimap Icon
• Great chatbox.
• Nice kneeling position.

3 Positive Comments

-1 for bad sniper icon
-1 for um, blurry bullets. make them cleaner and less blur

other than that, very good fake and nice idea

8/10

My rating:

+1: Good chatbox
+1: Nice sniper icon on the minimap, although it could use shading
+0: His shadow looks a bit weird
-0,5: The sniper ingame looks realistic but it has some blurry spots
-2: The wielded bullets and sniper have no black border and shadow
-1: His arm is messed up: priest/shade robes get wider near the wrists, not near the elbows
-1: His leg is also messed up, it looks like he has two knees

Starting from 10, you get 7,5!


I made some bullets out of your shape, take a look at it
I used 4 colours, like you did, but if you use more it can look even more realistic!

Is the white "thing" on the shoulders hair or one of those religious headdresses that some people wear, at first I thought it was offensive because I thought you were trying to make it look like a mid-eastern terrorist but then again it's my fault for thinking that.

Tbh, that's what I thought too. You're not alone, MJ

If you didn't notice, my char's a girl =P. (I'm a guy, needed it for RD)
It's just long white hair.

lol cool fake 9/10 cause the sniper in the invent seems abit strange

amazing but you should def use the ammo ewout made