A D A M
Sep 12 2009, 04:11 PM

rate and cc
Extremely basic but I got bored lol.
One
Sep 13 2009, 07:04 AM
What you are lacking in this signature is a theme. Your render definitely doesn't integrate itself into the background. Perhaps using vector graphics and small shapes in bold colours would work better but at the moment it's stereotypical grunge mixed with cartoon. Also make sure you mess around with more layers, for example everything that is really going on in your signature is behind the render itself. This makes the render look like it was slapped on there.
Spirit Shield
Sep 13 2009, 07:17 AM
It's good but like Fatal said, it looks like you slapped a c4d on, added a render and put some text on.
More effort, a slight transparency of the text andeffects in the render would make it 10/10.
You get 8/10
A D A M
Sep 13 2009, 01:33 PM
I did do more, but you guys basically got it right. I didn't really put much effort as I was tired, but I just wanted to post it. See what type of feedback I would get.
Thanks for the cc guys.
Spirit Shield
Sep 14 2009, 11:22 AM
No problem, it's still a pretty good piece of art.
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