"Things are not always entirely what they seem! In fact, in a world like RuneScape, full of all sorts of mysteries, magic and monsters, lots of things are not what they seem. "-- written by some guy.


INTRODUCTION


      At the begining of runescape there were three brothers; saradomin, guthix, and zamorAk. Everyone believed zamorak to be evil since he liked to fight but the most evil and cunning brother was saradomin he wanted his people to live and flourish he wanted to create a ethiopia. 


   He tried wiping out other species that he felt unpure and filthy. Zamorak and Guthix caught this just in time before most of the dwarves and knomes species was about to go extinct. So guthix and zamorak banded together and managed to put saradomin in his place. But saradomin never gave up on his dreams he decided to form a plan to overthrow his brothers. Then came the god wars, saradomin decided to ban with Armyadyl and wipe out Guthix and Zamorak. They were close to wining the war until bandos steped in. Zamorak was a idol to bandos and he didnt want zamorak and guthix to fall and saradomin to rise. With the help of bandos massive army zamorak and guthix managed to push back saradomin forces. 
 

  The war went on for many Ages all sides grew tired, Armydayl told Saradomin that he was running out of troops and he would soon have to drop out of the war, saradomin hated the idea but he decided to make a pact with all the gods and the war calmed down. Saradomin came up with a plan with armadyl he decided to put some of his life essence in a human with the plan that the human will one day awaken this power and rule over runescape, armadyl decided to do the same thing, soon all of the gods learned of his plan so they decided to create a messiah too. 


  But the chosen ones never did awaken the essence inside them, so once the person dies the essence jumps to another and cycle continues over and over. It is now a new age in runescape which has been filled with peace, there have been lil wars between the followers of the gods but nothing big. Keith is a young 16 year old boy who is a follower of saradomin as is everyone in his class. Keith was told that his parents were killed in a small war agianst zamorak folowers, he was adopted by the wise old man. He goes to the school in front of edgeville.

Chapter1


 "Hey keith wait up" Chris screamed from across the hall, Chris was one of keiths best friends, theyve known and trained together ever since 3 years old. "yeahh what happned" keith replied " i heard jake and trevor were going to fight wanna gonna watch dem" chris asked " is that all guys do is fight each other" melissa said, keith looked up as soon as he heard her voice, keith had a crush on melissa ever since he was 13 she was smart, hot, she wasnt nice doggy!y like some of the other girls and she was HOT!!!. " Are the only thing girls are good for is complianing" Chris exclaimed, Keith gave out a lil laugh but hushed himself as he saw Melissa glaring at him. " You can go watch dat since you guys have no lifes" then she walked away keith was following her with his eyes god she has nice legs keith was thinking to himself "hurry up we gonna miss it" chris screamed as he was walking away keith decided to go see the fight since he really didnt have anything better to do. 


    They made there way to the field where there were a crowd of people there screaming fight fight fight chris and keith squeezed there way through the crowd untill they were at the front row. Jake was a buff kid with long black hair he was wearing black d hide  and a robin hood hat keith never liked jake because he was to cocky he used his brute strength to bully people and he always tried to hit on Melissa. Trevor was of medium size wearing addamant plate legs and green d hide body. Jake was making a whole bunch of noise cussing at him waving his hands up and down, Trevor was just there stareing at him u could see he was really angry. Then Jake said somthing about trevors mom; who was killed by saradomins because she was a zamorak follower; Trevor punched jake in the mouth causing him to fall to the floor trevor then jumped on him and started pounding away jake used his big body to push off trevor " your going to pay for that u filthy zamorak follower" Jake screamed. Jake punched trevor in the chin  trevor countered back by punching jake in the stomach Jake crouched in pain then trevor gave him a hard knee on top of the head jake droped to the floor trevor was walking away jake grabed some dirt and flinged it in Trevors eyes, Trevor tried to scratch the dirt out of his eyes but to no aviel. Jake started to rapidly punch him in the face and finished off with one devastating blow to the chin Trevor fell down hard and was out cold, jake motioned for someone to come. Out of the crowd emerged two very big guys both hardly fiting in their full mith armour  they went to the back of Jake.


   Keith knew what was going to happen jake and his friends would pound on Trevors body till they felt satisfied. Keith wanted somone to stop this but he did not want to intervene because if he did jake would most likely want to fight him and Keith disliked to fight and he didnt know if he was strong enough to take him on. Jake toke  out a rune war hammer, Jake and his goons started advancing, Keith looked in horror he wanted someone to help him before they caused great damage to Trevor but no one was saying a word, Jake reached Trevors motionless body and raised his hammer Keith looked down he did not want see what was going to happen "stoppp" someone yelled keith looked up to see who it was and to his horror.


   It was Chris, Chris furious, Chris had a honur code and ganging up on a motionless guy is just disgracful. Jake looked at Chris and walked over too him " you would protect this filthy zammy" jake said " "you cant blame him for what his parents did" Chris said. Keith wished Chris would just shut up if chris were to get into a fight with Jake and his friends Keith would have to jump in for him, because watching trevor a guy he wasnt friends with get ganged up was bad enough but to standby and watch one of his best friends get beat up would be unforgiving. Chris was just staring at Jake with fire in his eyes Jake turned around and walked a few steps then stoped he turned around quick as lightning he threw two iron darts at Chris, Chris made a waving motion with his right hand and air gushed out and pushed the darts back. " Your going to need to do better then that if you want to beat me, i wont be as easy as Trevor" Chris rushed forward with nothing but his fist Jake was impressed with his speed right before Chris could deliver a deadly punch to Jakes face. One of the fat guys who name was Phil grabed Chris by the back of his shirt and flung him all the way to where the other fat guy was whos name was Tom. Tom was about to punch Chris right in the temple but keith ran quickly behind him,  and sweeped kicked him in the legs he droped with a thundrous crash. Keith helped Chris off the floor " thats all u guys do is pick on somone weaker then you and when there is somone strong enough to fight you, you pile him. You talk about trevor being a filthy zamorak you talk like you were chosen by saradomin himself but your just a coward!!" Keith said in a calm and coldly manner " you piece of trash how dare you talk to me like that to me, allow me to fullfill your deathwish, kill him tom and phil !!!" Tom who was on the floor grabed Keiths leg so he could not move but Chris stomped on his big arms untill he released him. Keith ran forward toward Tom at high speed, Keith was known for his speed, Tom tried to punch but Keith ducked at lightning speed Keith grabed his arm and flung him down to the ground then he jumped high in the air and delivered a thunderous knee to the stomach tom coughed out blood keith glared at Jake then out of no where Phil elbowed Keith on top of the head Keith let out a cry and crashed to the floor. 
  

  Keith saw Chris fighting Jake they seemed to be at equal strength. Tom and Phil started pounding away at Keith the crowd of kids just watched. Keith coughed out blood but they didnt stop pounding him. Keith felt a uncontrolable rage that he never felt before. Keith looked over to where Chris and Jake were fighting Chris landed a punch to Jakes  chest, Jake crouched to the floor and reached to his back and  he pulled out a addy dagger. This time Keiths rage flooded him, his eyes went red Keith could feel he was losing a grip on his body a force of just pure power pushed back Tom and Phil and sent them flying. A tornado of red wind surronded Keith. Out of the tornado people could see a menacing shawdowy figure grinning, he was buffed up there were red glowing markings on his whole body.

So many run-on sentences!!!

I'll give you this, at least; you made an effort. That's a big block of text you wrote there.

Sorry i had to write this on my ipod touch thats why the sentences never end and there arnt any paragraphs ill try and fix it

use pronouns once in a while. don't use a name more than once in each sentence, unless it's so confusing that you absolutely need to.

Chapter 2
 

  Jake lunged forward with the addy dagger in his hand Chris didnt have time to pull away, Chris closed his eyes to brace for the worse. In a flash of light Keith was in front of Jake and with the just the a flick of his wrist jake was flying through the air and crashed inyo a tree. Jake was bleeding massivly from hid forehead.

 "What the hell are you, your a monster" Jake screamed Keith walked a few steps forward and disappeared Jake looked all around but he couldnt see him then he looked up at the tree and was there standing on a branch grinning at him. Keith jumped down and started rapidly punching Jake in the forehead creating a crater in the tree.

  "Stop right there" a imstructor who worked at the school said; out of the crowd emerged a very massive guy with nothing but pure muscle; on his back was the strength cape he was wearing full dharoks. Keith didnt even glance at the instructor he just kept pounding Jakes face into a pancake. Once thr instructor relizied he wasnt going stop he ran forward and grabed Keith by the shoulder. Keith turned around at lightning speed and did one punch to the instructors chest and sent him flying into the wall, Keith managed to leave a 5 inch dent in the middle of his armour.

  "What the hell....uhhhhhh..... Damn it what is this kid" the instructor moaned as he picked himself up from the rubble Keith returned to beating the crap out of Jake. The instuctor knew if he didnt do any thing quick Jake wouldnt make it so the instructor toke out his dharok axe 

" please saradomin forvgive me" the instructor whispered as he rushed forward with god like speed and with all his strength he swung the back side of the mighty axe and sent Keith flying into a wall the glowing markings on Keiths body dimminshed,Keith was out cold he wasnt geting up.

  Keith gain back concous he felt a massive throbbing pain on his head he tried to reach his hand up to rub the pain but his hands were binded by chains. He was in a dark room only lit with small flames he was on a small wooden chair. He wondered what the hell is going on he tried to free himself from the chains but it was useless. 

"you wont get out of those chains there made of rune" keith looked up to see the instructor who knocked him out. 

 -"Who the hell are and where the hell am i !!!!!" Keith yelled

-" You know why your here and you will be charhged for it, tommrow you will go to trial and King Roald will decide what to do to you for putting a young boy in acoma there several mages working on him but they say he wont most likly wont make it through the night...." the instructor yelled at him " may saradomin make you pay for what you did" he said coldly as he walked away.

-"You cant keep me here you mother fuuuuc" keith had to stop himself He could feel his rage building up agian. In is head he can hear cold voice saying --"let me out agian i can free you, i can make you stronger, im the one who helped you take care of that kid"  --" no, you did that to Jake" keith whispered to himself-- " you know you want to feel that power agian i can feel that your angry you want to make that guy pay for locking you up i can help you"-- keith managed to muffle out the voice.
 Then Keith heard another voice but it wasnt the cold one, " i can help you control your rage mode and keep that beast locked up inside of you"

--" what the hell is up with me hearing damn voices am i a skitsafrienic or somthing" keith whispered--

" No you are the chosen one" the voice said.-- " holy crap is this saradomin " keith said excidatilly, keith always had dream of being something more than he was, he grew tired of school he wanted to go on a adventure he wanted to change the world.

--" NO!!..... This is Zerus" the voice said 

-- "No no no no no not zamorak, no why me i hate zamoraks they killed my family ill never be your chosen anything you filthy shizzle" Keith said angrly.

" ill free you from the chains only if you agree to meet me at the chaos alter"

" yeah thats great and all but how do i get out of this jail" keith said sarcastically

" see the four cracked bricks in the back push it and you will be in a tunnel made of cockaroaches be sure not to disturb them while they are working or you will lose a arm, now go..." suxdenly the rune chains droped to the floor keith rushed over to the wall quickly, he could hear the guards creeping closer. It was hard to find the bricks with little light he used a piece of a mirror to reflect the light and sure enough there were four bricks with a X shaped crack on them. When Keith pushed it tye piece of wall slid all the way down a entrance was created he ran as fast as he could as he got deeper the wall closed itself. Keith ran towards the light when he got to the other side it toke him some time to get used to the bright lights since he was stuck in a dark cell for more than 3 hours. When the blurryness went away he found himself in arun down prison which had been infested with cockaroaches almost each cell had a nest.

 Keith walked carfully around hundreds of tiny lil cockaroaches as they skittered around his feet. Keith could see a crack in the ceiling that had a rope hanging down he quickly
rushed himself over to the room without steping on any of the cockaroaches once he reached the room he saw one of the biggest cockaroaches he ever seen it was almost as big as a green dragon it was feasting on a giant bats decaying body. Keith quietly tip toed his way there then half way there *crunch* Keith looked down at his feet and saw a mushed up dead beby cockaroach. Keith then heard something that almost made his heart drop, the large cockaroach was stairring at him hissing and crunching his jaws.

  keith knew that he would have to battle the roach if he were to climb up the rope the roach would most likly snap him in half. He wondered how he was going to fight it because he had no weapons at all. Keith and the roach were circling each other, until he spoteda couple of runes there were a chaos rune and a fire rune. Great keith thought to himself he wasnt really good with magic but he had to try.
 
 Keith used his impressive speed he ran toward the roach as fast as he could the roach lunged forward and tried to take a bite. But Keith had slid under the roaches belly and landed next to the runes he quickly picked it up. He ran full speed at the roach agian it tried to take a bite out of him but keith was way to fast for this fat beast he jumped up high into the air and landed on the beasts back. He put his right hand over the beast eyes and yelled out with all his might 

"firee blasttt" the beast head lit  on fire the roach was smashing itself into the wall to try extinguish the burning flame but to no avial. The roach fell to the floor dead its head was half gone keith checked the body and found addy ores and a rune skimmy keith was exstatic not only did he kill a powerful beast but he got a rune skimmy but his hapiness was short lived for upon finding the rune skimmy he was greeted by a thousand hisses of small coackaroaches all skurrering at full speed towards him. 
"ahhh shhiiiiii" keith screamed as he was running toward the rope he toke a major jump and landed 3 feet on the rope he quickly climbed his way up he reached the top and with all his strength he heaved himself up. His whole upper body felt like a thousand pins he looke down the hole and could see the cockaroaches climbing up, he quickly rushed over to a boulder and with every muscle in his body he started pushing it he kept pushing until the rock was over the hole only the very small roaches escaped he quickly mushed them.

  keith made his way to the border between the wild there was a guard there whonasked him if he was sure but keith didnt even answer him he just kept on walking. He got to the front of the chaos alter there was a eerie fog that hung around the alter in the middle of the fog he could make out two red eyes staring at him.

Chapter 3 will come up soon dont cry. plz post to tell me how my story is.

Chapter 3

  Keith made his way through the mist until he reached the sour e of the red eyes but there was nothing there soon the fog disappeared he looked around but there was nothing there.

" i see that you came" the zerus said as he taped keiths back who at the touch jumped a foot

"god, dont do that; i only came yere to kill you.." keith lunged toward zerus with the rune smimmy but zerus easily moved out of the way keith kept swiping and slashing but zerus was easily dodging keith mqnqged to land a swip on zerus armour who slid a couple feet.

" Allright if you wanna play lets play" zerus unsheathed a samurai sword, its blade was red on the handle it the unholy symbol. Keith ran forward zerus almost didnt have time to block. He swiped down and hit Keiths sword he slid four feet and slammed into a tree keith was no regreting attacking him but he couldnt back down now. Keith ran forward at max speed zerus lunged down but by that time keith jumped in the air and swiped down but zerus caught the sword in his bare hand no matter how hard keith pushed down it didnt even phase him.

"hmph and your suppose to be a zamorak ive never seen such a weaker zamorak than you.." zerus said

" what the hell are you talkin about im saradomin" 

"no matter how much you wish you will always be a zamorak" upon hearing this keith rage peaked his eyes went he could feel himself losing a grip on controling his body. The inraged keith started punching crqzy ay high speed trying to lqnd a hit on zerus face but forevery hit he did zerus parried it. This made the inraged keith angrier the red glowing body markings showed up keith just reached out his hand infront zerus face and shouted zamorak claws zerus almost didnt have enough time to get out of the way but he ended up with a one inch scar on his cheek.

  "thats it lets end this now" zerus equiped dragon gauntlets and layed down his sword. Imraged keith lunged forward but zerus disappeared in a instant. BAM keith was hit in the jaw and was sent flying high in the air. Zerus jumped and delivered several hits to his stomach, chest, cheek, chin, and forehead then ended with a destructive kick to his back which sent him shooting through a boulder before zerus landed he slamed his elbow right in keiths gut. 

 keith awoke with is whole body in pain, he felt like he was being stabed whenever he moved his body. 

"here drink this its a full restore you should feel a lil better" zerus sais as handed him a vial with some pink liquid.

"what the hell hapned to me"

" your inner rage tokw you over, it only occurs in zamoracks but rarly, its like a alter ego but far more menacing.... If u dont learn to control it, it will consume you and cause mass havoc"

"and how the hell am i suppose to do that"

" i will train you, then when i believe you are ready you will face him in your sub concous, if u win you will gain more like noone else before, but if you lose and your inner rage suceeds in taking over your body i will have to put a end to you"

"i already told you i dont want anything to do with zamoraks i rather let a kurask eat me alive"

"ahhhh yes you believe zamoraks to have killed your parents but you are sadly mistaken in fact your parents were zamorak followers who moved near edgeville to start a family when you were about two saradomins in varrock burst into your house  your dad fought them in the front yard while your mom rushed to hide you in a kitchen cabnet then she to started fighting they were winning until a saradomin priest came and your parents fell...….…."

  Keith was staring in disbelif he didnt know wether to beliege him or not. "you can ask.        But for now you need to train if you ever want to be strong enough to avenge them and control your rage"

" but you said i was chosen, chosen for what?"

" after the god wars all the gods put some of there life essence in a young child with the hope the child will one day grow up and awaken the power within and lead the followers and control runescape.. But none of the chosen ones have ever awoken it you are the first to have awaken it and if you did than that surely means that the other gods chosen ones have and are probaly training them right now."

"but what the hell are we training for"

"in 3 years saradomin will pledge war on all the species of runescape exccept his millions of millions saradomin followers"

"no saradomin wouldnt do some f'd up shizzle like that"

"surely you dont know my brother, he only wants whats best for him and his followers he could care less of the tinier insects"

"but who is his chosen one"

"You will find out in 3 years all the chosen ones are set to meet" 

"fine what are you going to teach me"

" first i will teach you some of the simple god powers such as flash step"
"flash whaa"
"flash step its like teleportation except you could do it quick without runes and land anywhere you want in a short distance.... Let me demenstrate" zerus walked about 50 yards away from keith then he started running towards keith and in a instant he disappeared into thin air. Keith felt a touch on his back and quickly turned around and sure enough zerus was right there.

"hollllllllyyyy shizzle you have to teach me that"

"watch your mouth and i might"

"if you want to do flash step you need to meditate and learn to control the chakra in your body" 

"what the hell if i learn how to control my chakra i can do jutsus like shadow clone jutsu"

"..........this isnt naruto, chakra runs through your whole body if you can control it and move it to specific places in your body such as your arms will make your punches faster and stronger same for your legs. To do flash step you need to centralize your chakra in your feet and when you feel it concetrate on a specfic place and you will end up there now try it"

Keith sat down and crossed his legs he tried to feel the chakra in his body.
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Hours past but keith was having a trouble finding his chakra. " you have to concentrate finding your chakra isnt hard it runs through your whole body for peaks sake" zerus yelled at him. Keith blocked him out he could feel some kind of energy pulsating through him he conctrated harder. Zerus could feel keith was sensing energy "good find it then control it" he said encouragly. Keith found his chakra he was able to push and move it around he felt he was ready now. He stood up " ok what do i need to do now" keith said
Zerus walked a few feet in front of keith "ok nowpush all the chakra to your feet and flash step behind me" 
"ok ill try my best" keith toke a deep breath closed his eyes and pushed all his chakra to his feet then he started walking slowly then he felt a hot sensation then he opned up his eyes. He could tell he was deep in the wilderness he was worried he never was in the wilderness this far he used to hear stroies of elemantal monsters, poisonous spiders, red dragons, and demons he felt that he had to keep on moving he walked pass a couple of giant spiders he was walking near this wrecked ship.

 Keith stoped dead in his tracks the air was icy cold he could feel a presence then he heard a growl he turned around and was staring at a giant revnant ork. The thing was massive, he could tell it was a ghost so he knew his rune skimmy wouldnt cause any harm to it. Keith kept backing up mayb he could use flash step to run but he couldnt concentrate the ork advanced at him and toke a swipe at him with his massive hammer keith tryed to dodge but was hit on the right arm, he cryed out in pain he smashed through the boat, keith wanted to lay there his body was telling him to just stay and rest but keiths mind was screaming at him to get up get up get up get up fight back dont go out like this. The ork burst through the boat and tried to swipe keiths head off but he ducked and was able to run out of the boat. He saw a broken down house with lever he tried running to it but before he could reach the ork delivered a freeze spell, keith couldnt move at all his whole body was going numb from the cold he thought to himself is this how im gonna go out i cant i cant.... The ork krept closer it looked more and more menacing as it got closer the ork picked up its mighty hammer and heaved it up over his head and was about to take a swipe down until zerus appeared right in front of it with his hand held out to his head " rest you lost soul " and with a blinding red light the ork diminshed into thin air. Keith felt like shizzle he couldnt save himself, he felt soo weak and worthless how was he going fight saradomin zerus grabed him and they flash steped back close to the chaos altar.





Sorry if there are alot of mistakes on here i was in a rush and sorry i didnt finish the charector drawings. I need help making up some charectors so plz post your ideas of a new cool strong charector and he might be in the story. 
  

Is any one going to tell me how they feel about the story if they like it or not?????

Chapter 4

  "ive never seen anyone travel that far with a flash step, we are going to need to help you focus" zerus said 

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 After two months of extensive training keith mastered flash step. Keiths flash step was even faster then zerus one. He also mastered controling his chakra he could put all his chakra in one punch and burst through a boulder easily.

" am i ready to fight my inner rage now zerus???" 

"no we still have a long way to go, the next god move i will teach you is la muerta ha colpito, its a devastating blast you need a death rune and blood rune and your own blood"

"what the hell did u say, i need my blood are you crazy you old geezer"

"to perform this high levl attack you have to sacfrice something of your body"

"shizzle im not cutting myself"

"no need to ill cut you myself" and in a flash zerus pulled out his blade and tried to slash keiths arm but keith used flash strp to land in the back of zerus and hit him with a strong right, zerus stumbled a couple feet forward. Keith tried hiting him agian but zerus crouched fown and was able to leave a small cut on keiths hand.

"see that wasnt to hard" zerus said proudly. Keith felt weak, agian he wasnt sucessful on protecting himself.
"here take this and that now pronounce after me la muerta ha colpito" zeus said as he handed keith the runes.

"la muerta ha colpittooo!!!" keith screamed and a small red blast the size of a golf ball came shooting out his hand rather slowly hit a boulder making a meduim size indent.

"uhmmmm that was good, at least you got it on your first try, we just have to make it stronger" zerus said confidently
Day and night keith worked on the technique he wasted alot of blood at times he would have to rest for days to gain back all the blood he lost but after 3 months he perfected the technique enough to destroy a boulder and objects around it. Keith was now three times as strong as he ever was before. Keith and zerus were now practicing on sword technique. 

Keith swiped down at zerus but he was able to flash step behind keith, zerus shot straight forward with his sword held straight at keith the sword pentrated throigh keoths chest but then keiths imaged blurred and then disappeared zerus was confused until keith hit him with a massive elbow on top of the head.

"owww what the hell i thought i stabed you" zerus screamed

"nope thats my new technique i call it after image,  i move so fast that it leaves a image of me for a brief moment, am i good or ami good" keith said proudly

"when did you learn that"

"  i trained on it almost everyday"

" how comes ive never seen you do it"

"cause your asleep half the time, you old man!" zerus gave him q hard punch on the top of his head. "owwww dont get mad at me cause your a old fart"

"you are ready to Fight your inner rage, you have four days to train ill meet you by the red dragon isle, goodbye for now"

"nooo wait!!!"keith yelled but zerus had already vanished keith was worried he didnt want to sleep in the wilderness all by himself plus how was he going to get food usually zerus got it and cooked as he looked around the wilderness zeemed more menacing and scarier. But with only four days to train for one of the biggest fights of his life he had no time to worry he started trainig his flash step he wanted to be at his best he trained from that morning all they way to midnight he decided to rest so that his body would be at its peak. He had a hard time going to sleep he could hear hundreds of growls before with zerus the wild seemed to be calm but now without him the wild was going wild no pun intended. Keith woke up around half past rune well rested he quickly found some wild chickens and roasted them even though they were kind of burned they did the job.

 keith decided to train his strength and sword skills he heard rumors of there being a clan of greater demons hanging around causing trouble so he decided to take care of them he asked a couple of people who were passing by if they saw them they said the demons were causing a problem near clan wars keith walked for a while until he he could here the grunts and roars. Keith walked into the graveyard there he saw five massive demons, red flooded there eyes there teeth was the size of keiths darts they were all pumped up. In one of the demons hand was a beutiful unconcous girl another one had a youngboy. Keith walked into the center of the gathering the demons didnt notice him until he unseathed his sword. "hey look at this guy i think he wants to fight us hahahahahhahahahaha" one of the demons said. "put the hot girl down and the young boy an prepare yourself"keith said calmly. "you dont really thinm a puny human like you can take on elite demons like us, we are part of the angeli della morte clan" 

"i could care less of what u claim, now prepare yourself !!!!" a red light illuminated keith the demons droped the girl and the boy, he hoped none of their bones were broken but he had no time to check the demon swung down one of his mighty fist while another one tried stomping but keith used his flash step to climb up the demons arm who swung down at him keith reached the demons face and toke one mighty swipe leaving a deep scar down the demons eye. The demon cryed out in pain keith flash steped to his throat area and stabed him deep into his jugular the demon droped to the floor has his blood splurred out he tried to talk but there was too much blood in his mouth.

The four remaining demons were silent three demons charged at him and in a second keith used flash step to all their legs xutting behind there ankles all the demons droped to the floor keith quickly went behind each ones of there necks and quickly stabed them ending there life quickly. Now there was only one, keith wasnt even getting a warm up. This last demon was murming something then its eyes turned completly white and and a bright light illuminated its whole body it was too blinding to see when the light diminshed in front of keith stood a buff swordsman with some kind of mask its eyes were compltley black. Keith could feel the air all around him turn icy cold, keith knew he was in deep shizzle the immense power this thing was letting out was making keiths leg shiver.

"WhaaT the hell are you" keith asked

"you can call me a morte spadaccino" the thing let out a grin and unsheathed its sword.


Chapter 5 will come out in a while since its almost halloween i will write a short scary story dealing with keith that will have nothing to do With the plot just for fun it will comwout on halloween so
Read it.

Ive made a picture of zerus but i dont know how to upload it to the site so
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Listen, it would be very hard to point out every mistake you made in this, since a lot of them are repeated errors and such. Anyway, let me try the first paragraph for you.

Uncapitalize the second 'a' in Zamorak; also, the three of them weren't brothers. Of course, you can use that for story purposes later on, but just know it's incompatible with Runescape's history. The semicolon ( should be a colon (, and there should not be a new line when the three gods are named.


Once more, keep the lines flowing, don't create a new one randomly in the sentence. So everyone thinks that Zamorak is evil, but because Saradomin wanted people to live and flourish he was even more evil? That just doesn't make sense unless an explanation is offered (perhaps by saying 'he tricked them into thinking that...' or something along those lines).


He wanted to create an Ethiopia!? Are you sure you don't mean a utopia? Remember to not create new lines over and over again.

You know, you might have a fantastic plot, but writing it in this format, with randomly started new lines and no clear endings to sentences, is quite hard to read, and your plot will never be expressed in the way you want it to be unless you fix these errors. Otherwise, as Aliath pointed out, it's just a big block of text with many run-on sentences. Try running this through a spell-check (make sure it checks grammar, as well), too.

Overall, please keep writing and improving as you do so.

HALLOWEEN SPECIAL


Grim House

Part1

   It was a dark Halloween evening almost every kid had a halloween mask except Keith. He didnt feel the need to dress up like a fool and celabrate somthing that is not even a holiday, he liked tricky treating cause he liked getting candy his favorite was purple candy it filled him up with energy and a good taste. 

  "BOOOOO!!!" Chris screamed at Keith with his red halloween mask which looked like a dragons head Keith but he was unphased. 

"whats up" keith asked 

"nothin... Hey later we were gonna go to Draynor Village with a group of friendz to trick or treat wanna come"

 Keith didnt like hanging out with crowds of people he doesnt know" man i dont know.." Keith answered not wanting to say no to Chris.

 "I heard melisa was going to be there" Chris stated 

Keith let out a little grin "fine okay" 

  Keith and Chris walked around varrock seeing all the differnt costumes one kid had a pumkin head another one had a fake skelton mask and one even had a full chicken costume which gave Keith and Chris a little smirk. When it started to get dark Chris decided to start to walk to Draynor they toke a short cut through the barberien village Keith could of sworn he saw a couple of the tree branches move on there own. They past a big lump of dirt that looked like it had been recntly digged Chris bended down to pick some black cloth that was half in the dirt.

"why the hell are pickng up random stuff" Keith asked

"well you cant go trick or treating with out a mask" Chris said

"helll no im not putting that on you gotta be crazy its dirtier then a damn cave crawler" Keith said as he backed up.

"look we'll jus wash it off a bit" Chris said 

"what the hell is it, its jus a dirty rag" Keith stated

"no its a hood if you put it on youll look like the grim reaper your be the coolest kid in the group, noone else will have a mask like yours; maybe melissa might like it huhuh" Chris said confindently.

"fine make sure you wash it good" Keith said unsure; chris walked over to the river near the old spooky house.

"there good as new" Chris said as he handed Keith the hood; he pulled on the hood it didnt smell all that great but it was manigable Keith and Chris went on there way. 

"hey look at that house its huge" Chris said as he was memorized by tha house. 

" it looks like its haunted i wouldnt want to live there" Keith said as he stared at the house. Keith could see a group of kids around the bank and in the crowd he could see Melissa who was wearing red ele blouse and skirt with a Saradomin stole around her neck. 

"woaaaaah" all the kids said as they saw Keiths hood, he was kind of embrassed because all the kids were looking at him but it soon left when he relized Melissa was watching him so he decided he needed to act cool so he started strutting he was almost by the group until 

"MEEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOOOW" Keith heard right before he triped on a black cat that was passing by and landed almost face first but he was able to put his hand out to stop the ground from meeting his face, qnd his embrassment returned.

"your okay" Melissa said as she came to help Keith up.

"damnn cat" Keith said as he dusted off the tiny rocks embedded in his hand. He had small lil cuts on his hand which pained him little.

"here let me take care of that" Melissa said as she grabed Keiths hand and murmered some sentence and a green light illuminated his hand and the pain in his hand diminshed, Melissa gave out a smile as she put down his hand.

" th aa a a n..ks" Keith said rather quietly

"smooth Keith" Chris whispered into Keiths ear, Keith gave him a little shove " OKAY!!!! lets go before they run out of good candy" Chris yelled then started marching trailed by the rest of the crowd. Keith admired that about Chris that he was soo confident and toke the leader position so easily. 

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After about two hours the whole group had fulled up most of their bags; they went to all the draynor houses. 

"hey we didnt go to that one yet" Chris stated as he pointed at the spooky house they saw earlier. Most of the kids gave out a moan and were like im not going in there about half the group left. There was only keith, chris, melissa, a girl with blonde long hair named Sulie, a scrawny boy with red hair named Earl and a muscular kid name Jacob. They all decided to go to the house as they passed the iron gate a white hand grabed Keith by the back Keith let out a little scream Chris turned around quick with a Rune dagger in his hand pointed at a young girl with orange hair with pig tails. 

"hee..lllo my name is Veronica my husband went in there to help a scientest out with some invention about 3 days ago but he hasnt returned..... I cant go in there because i heard it is runned with ghost and monsters i wouldnt last a second in there please please help me?" Veronica pleaded.

 Keith felt bad for her he wanted to help but how much could he really do. The group didnt want to disappoint her so they decided they would take a look but no guarentees. Veronica got on her knees and thanked them. As Keith walked down deeper into the front yard something hit him hard on his head he looked back just in time to see the tree branch recoil, Keith didnt want to say anything to the group because they would think he was crazy. Keith and the group arrived the large iron doors. Chris knocked the door as hard as he could, it let out a large sound as it echoed through the house, they waited for a while but there was no answer. 

    Chris gave keith a look and motioned to the door than both of them backed up and ran to the door fast and both gave the door a hard kick one of the doors swung open,

  Keith and Chris scanned the room than the whole group walked in. After Jacob walked into the entrance the door swung closed Jacob tried opening it but to no aviel. They walked through another door and they arrived in a old dusty house with cobwebs everywhere.

"doesnt look like anyones been here long" Sulie said.

" ok lets break up into three groups, ok"' Jacob said trying to take the leadership position.

"no we should uhmm stick together" Keith said

"yeah we should, if we stay togther then we will be less prone to attack there is power in numbers" Melissa stated.

"ok that settles it we are going to stay togther and scan the the first floor" Chris said regaining his leader position.  As they passed a door under the staircase the group heard a banging on the door Keith tried opening it but it was locked. 

   "it could he him lets look for the key hurry" Chris said as he scanned the floor. They walked into the hall way and turned the corner they noticed a bookroom they looked investigated the desk and table but they didnt find any key. 

"hey, Keith can you help me look through these books they might have the key inside them" Melissa asked, Keith rushed over there and started flipping through the books there about 20 books up there Keith noticed this unusual book it was completly black and had picture of a skull on it. Keith flipped through the first chapter the book talked about death the grim reaper. "the Grim Reaper is the incarnation of death, he was appointed by Guthix to guide souls to their final resting place. Guthix has equiped the reaper with a scythe to strengthen him and release a soul from the body, his robes protected him from magical missiles attacks, his hood protected him from binding magical spells and memory erasing spells, and magical amulet that strengthens him and let him control lost souls. It is said that the Grim Reaper is one of the strongest things in Runescape only one person lived after battleing him but sadly ended up in acoma" Keith stoped his reading as he saw a book with a ruby embeded in the spine he tried to pull on it but it didnt move he mustered up all his strength and he pulled on it with all his might then the book moved a inch Keith could hear a clunking sound then the whole wall fliped Keith and Melissa arrived in another room that had no door but it had a trapdoor which Keith could see some light down there. 

"what.... what the hell did you do " Melissa asked while she banged on the wall trying to scream for help.

"uhmm i just pulled this book..... Im sorry" Keith said as he bowed his head from embrassment.

"no.. Its ok we have to find a way out" melissa stated as she felt around the bookcase.

"look theres a trap door i can see some light coming from there i think someone is down there" keith said as he opned up the trapdoor. Melissa walked over to the trapdoor she looked like she was unsure about going down there.  

"ladies first" Melissa said as she pointed down, Keith gave out a little laugh then jumped down. He arrived in a giant fire lit room. There were a couple of cells that had levers in them most of them were locked it seemed that there was noone there so Keith motioned for Melissa to come down, she jumped down elengantly and smooth.

"Why are these levers here for and whats up with these cells" Melissa asked As she walked around examining the room. 

"Hey i can see something in this locked cell i think its a chest, it might have the key but how the hell do we open this cell up" Melissa yelled at Keith.

-----meanwhile-----

"hey where the hell is Keith and Melissa" Sulie asked

"maybe there making out" Jacob said but noone laughed, Chris started frantically looking around the room for them.

"shizzle we got to be carful" Chris stated as he walked out the room he arrived in a room fulled with chairs the group examined the shelves and desk but found no key. Earl sat down on one of the chairs to take rest as soon as he did the chair lifted off the ground and threw him at the wall at high speed, blood splurred out of earls mouth. All of a sudden all the chairs came to life one threw themselves at Chris but he used his addy longsword spliting it in two but another chair hit him in the back of the head knocking him out. Jacob quickly grabed Chris's motionless body and put him out of dangers way. Another chair tried slamming into Jacob but he caught it and riped it in half with his awesome strength the group crowded in a corner as all the chairs advanced onto them. 

-----meanwhile-----
"maybe if we pull some of the levers the door will open" Keith stated.

"lets try than" Melissa said as she walked over to a lever near the trapdoor as she pulled it the one of the cell doors opened. They both walked into the cell as they pulled down the lever the cell door they entered through closed shut and the one to the right of them opened as they walked toward the cell they noticed that the cell door that had the chest was also opened but there was no way to get there.

"hey, maybe if we pushed that lever that we just pulled and i walk out then you pull it agian i can retrieve the chest" Melissa said.

"ok lets try" Keith said as he pushed the lever, the door opened up and Melissa walked out while Keith remained. Once she was out of the room he pulled down the lever and the door closed, but the door to the chest opened than Melissa walked in as she touched the chest Melissa flew back a couple of inches.

"are you okay" Keith asked sincerly

"yeah, uhh this chest has pretty strong protective charm its gonna take me awhile to defuse so just hold on" Melissa stated. Keith examined the room he was in while Melissa started chanting some stuff.  Keith turned around and was examining Melissa thats one thing he liked  about her she was very smart and skilled in magic.

"bwuuaaaaaakkkkhhhh" Keith turned around quick as lightning there stood in font of him a two foot chicken with a massive beak and red piercing eyes its feather was grayish. It ran to Keith with impressive speed he almost didnt have time to move out the way, the beak left him with a small gash on his arm, its beak was deadly sharp he knew wouldnt be able to take a direct hit from this chicken. Keith decided to make the first move while the chickens back was towards him he ran at him with full speed, he pulled his leg all the way back cocking it like a shotgun and with all his strength kicked the chicken in the head keith could hear the neck crack the chicken flew all the way to the wall and landed with a splat blood splurred out of the chickens mouth.

Keith ket out a sigh of relief, but his happiness was short lived as three more chickens arrived out of smoke.

"are you okay" Melissa asked.

"yeah.. Im just lovely" Keith said sarcastically as he tried to fend off the chickens by kicking them. Keith knew he couldnt take the offensive side because they would gang up on him so far now all he could do is dodge.

"do you think you can hurry" Keith asked

"almost just hold up" Melissa said as she tried to concentrate. Three of the chickens ran toward him at high speed Keith quickly jumped over one them. Then one jumped in the air trying to claw at keiths face but Keith delivered a devastating blow to the top of his head knocking it out unconcous.  The two remaining ones got infurous and jumped at full spead, there beaks aiming straight for his head Keith quickly ducked and ran to a corner.

"yess!!, i got the key run out Keith" Melissa said excitly. Keith used his speed to run on the walls and pushed up the lever the door swung open keith quickly ran out with the chickens out on his trial but Melissa threw a massive wind blast throwing the chickens to the wall dazing them. The unconcous chicken was know awake and luanched itself at Melissa, Keith jumped high in the air and dlivered a devastating knee crushing the chickens skull. Melissa started climbing the ladder as fast as she could keith was right behind her. Finally they made it to the room and quickly shut the trap door, and placing a heavy dresser over it. They both felt relieved they gave each other a quick smile.

"how are we going to get out of this room" Keith asked

"lets look around the wall there might be something that would send us in the right room" Melissa stated.
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Sulie was casting a pretty strong protective charm as the chairs started ramming themselves into the shield. Sulie didnt know how much longer she could hold the shield, it put immense stress on her body. All six chairs rammed into the shield at the same time, the shield smashed from the shear force, Sulie had nomore strength left to do anything, Jacobs energy was zero, Chris was still knocked out, and Earl was too weak and hurt to do anything. The chairs backed up and threw themselves at full speed.

"FIRE BLAST" Melissa yelled and out of her palm shot a massive sphere fire, setting all of the chairs ablazed. The chairs started shaking vilointly as the fire spread through the whole body quickly turning them to ashes.

"where the hell were you two" Kacob said

"we were traped in another room untill we found a lever" Keith said as he walked over to Chris pouring some saradomin brew down his throat to replinish his strength. 

"what the hell..... What happned where were you two" Chris asked

"long story lets go quick" Keith said as he helped Chris to his feet. As the group walked away a hand burst out from the bottom of the wall grabing earl by his leg making him fall and broke his nose Chris quickly grabed his hand before Earl was sucessfully sucked into the wall.

"help me..... Help me please i dont want to die here" Earl
Screamed at the top of his lungs.

"Dont worry i got you" Chris said, Chris was sucessfully pulling him back until there was a hard pull Chris could hear a snap and Earl cry out about his arm at that moment Chris loosened his grip out of fear and Earl was gone into the darkness. 

"Noooooooo!!!!!" Chris screamed as he had tears roll down his eyes and he slammed his fist on the ground.

Keith pulled him up " hes gone but we can still get him back" Keith said.

"We have the key, lets go open the door" Melissa said the whole group walked to the door that was under the staircase they all stared as Chris toke the key and placed into the key hole it was a perfect fit they all toke a deep breath and then chris turned the key the door creaked open. They couldnt see anything the room was very dark.

"Hello anyone inside" Chris asked and as soon as he did two red eyes. A giant skelton leaped forward slamming into chris knocking him to the floor. The skelton wielded a steel long and a round shield. It toke a massive swipe at Keith but Melissa grabed him by the shirt and pulled him back. Chris threw his rune dagger to Keith. He caught it and started swiping at the skelton but the it used its shield to defend. Jacob tried to take deliver a punch but the skelton stabed him in the abdomine. Jacob droped to the floor, bleeding heavily; Keith managed pierce the skeltons shoulder blade. The skeltons arm droped to the floor, Melissa jumped into the air over keith and delivered a bunch of water blast slashing away at the bones till they were all severed the only thing intact was the head which kept on trying to bite. Keith went to go help Jacob who was passed out on the floor from loss of blood but before he could reach his body a arm from the bottom of the wall reached out and grabed Jacobs hand pulling him deeper into the wall, Keith lunged forward but came up short and Jacob was gone.

"DAMN IT!!! Why are those things taking us" Keith yelled angrily.

"I dont know, but we have to keep moving; by the rooms with the chairs there were stairs going down lets see where they lead" Chris said, the whole group walked to the stairs they could see candles flickering they all walked down. At the end of the room was a large coffin.

"What do you think is in there" Sulie asked.

"beats me... But im going to go check" Chris replied, as he walked up to coffin and slowly pushed off the lid.




Part 2 will hopfully be posted by tommrow and then when i finish with this story ill post chapter five.

Nice story, just many grammar errors, and please don't double post.

Sorry about how the lines jus skip i ran it through word and thats what happened





Does any1 no how to delete post because i think i might just delete the story and write a new one but it will have the same character and the same plot but there will be alot of changes.

Part 2 

Chris lifted off the lid of the stone coffin, he peered in side but saw only darkness but he could smell a putruide and disgusting smell then suddenly out of the darkness two red eyes appeared accompynied by fangs the pale monster grabed Chris but he was lucky enough to have his hand griped on the stone coffin both of them were in a tug of war. Keith ran to his aide pulling on Chris shoulders with all his strength while Sulie and Melissa conjured up a air blast. Keith could feel his grip sliping on him but he fought to hold on he couldnt dread the thought of losing his best friend to this monster.

 a big sphere of air passed right by him pushing him to the side while it sent chris flying back and it hit the monster dead in the face the beast let out a moan of pain. It rised from the coffin its skin was as pale as edward collins eyes red as blood, nails and fangs sharp as knives. Keith knew right away what this abomination was, it was a vampire his class was just given a lecture about these. He worried how was he going to kill this or defeat it with out no garlic or a stake but he had no time to think as the beast rushed toward Melissa. Keith sprang into action using his god like speed he got in front of the vampire and plunged his rune dagger into its chest where the heart would be the beast let out a moan and threw him to the ground Chris did a jump kick knocking the beast back a couple of steps while Sulie blasted him with a wind blast. Making the beast furous it charged toward Sulie at high speed Chris and Melissa tried to get in the way but they were knocked to the ground. The vampire grabed sulie by the hair and draged her to the coffin, keith could hear her fingernails scratching the floor. Keith got up from the floor and charged at the vampire but the vampire punched him in the chin and sent him flying towards the wall the vampire jumped into the coffin. Chris ran over to it but there was nothing in there.

"what the hell how could they just vanish like that... DAMN IT!!!! Tbey toke another one of us" Chris yelled

"come on we have to check upstairs" melissa said

Now there was three, the three of them walked up to the second floor of the house it was a very large room with empty space they explored each of the space to check for anything unusual. But they found nothing and were becoming very fustrated they already lost three of there friends and they still need to find the husband. Keith was deep in thought trying to figure out why these things were picking each of them off.

"holy crap!! Help me Keith" chris yelled Keith rushed to the room and saw Chris levitating high in the air and he saw two yellow eyes and a figure of a ghost holding him keith didnt know what to do so he tried to punch it but he went right through it slamming himself agianst the wall he tried to grab Chris and pull him down but chris didnt move a inch down another ghost flew Keith across the room and threw some kind of spell keith closed his eyes and waited for the pain but there was none keith tried to run after Chris but another ghost was holding him back and before he could do anything the ghost toke chris away. A tear rolled down his eyes thinking that he might not ever see his friend agian. About seven ghost surronded Keith they were feeding off his life energy little bit by bit, he could feel himself fading away.

"wind blast" keith could see melissa blasting a current of air blowing the ghost away. Keith droped to the floor with a hard thud, he wanted to get up but had no energy at all melissa ran to his side and poured down some saradomin brew . Energy pulsed through his body but before he could get up something grabed him by the leg and was dragging him keith tried ti grip something but there was nothing near him. Melissa scrambled to take out runes she managed to take out some air runes and a chaos but before she could cast a spell she was knocked to the wall the ghost started to drag her away.

"ahh crap..... Take me leave her and take me" keith yelled but the ghost didnt even glance back he draged melissa untill she was out of sight keith was still being hold down by the ghost, keith was angry now he quickly twisted himself in a way that the ghost couldnt hold him several other ghost tried to catch him but they were to slow. He quickly ran and grabed all the runes he toke a deep breath and stoke his hand forward.

"wind blast!!!!" a stream wind pushed all the ghost slamming them every where, they all scrambled as they fled. Now keith was alone and he was angry he wanted to find the source of the problem and end it. He walked to a stair case that was leading up he could see flashing lights so he climbed up ready to encounter anything as he got up he saw a very small old guy wearing a lab coat.

"ahhh my other test subject" he said coldly

"what have you been doing here you crazy old fart!!" keith yelled.

"come watch" the scientest said as he pointed to a chair that was hooked up in the chair was a scrawney looking man he looked dazed.
"what the hell are you doing let him go" keith yelles as he ran to the guy trying to take him out of the chair  but the guy was traped in good.
"wait!!! theres more" the scientest said as he danced around and then he pushed a button on a small remote he was holding. 5 slots opened up on the floor and up rised melissa, chris, jacob, earl, and sulie. 
"you crazy fool" keith yelled as he ran toward the scientest with a rune dagger in his hand.
"stop" the scientest said cold and calmly keith stoped, the rune daggers blade was just inches from the scientest neck.
"step another inch forward and i will press this button and your friends brains will fry like eggs. Hhahahhahahhahhahahah!!" the scientest yelled, keith wondered if he was quick enough to slice the scientest throat but he didnt want to risk it. Keith steped a few inches back and stared at the scientest with anger in his eyes.

"what to you want for me" keith said

"i need to test my latest experiments strength so dont put away that rune dagger your going to need it" the scientest said as he rushed over to the computer and started typing crazly then with a dramatic push of a red button the scrawney guy in the chair atarted screaming in pain. He was trying to get out of the chair with all his might but the braces was holding him down. Keith felt pity for him he wish he could stop his pain but there was nothing he could do and before his eyes the man skin started moving the man started to glow and a white light illuminated him keith put his hand infront of his face to block the blinding light.

  the mans yells soon started turning to bwuhking sounds, keith knew what was coming. The light diminshed and keith saw a 7 foot tal chicken man its beak was deadly sharp its eyes were pitch black, its arms were buff and it had sharp nails, and so was its claws at his feet. 

"your task is to survive, hahaha which i doubt a kid like you could" the scientest yelled.


I know its been a long ass time since i last posted but i had alot of school work. And the next chapter is the last of this short story, and i know this is really short.    

Part3

 keith stood in front of the menacing monster if the thing wasnt bind keith was sure that would rip out his throat. Keith could feel fear creep up on him, he wished he never came into this god for saken house, now if he lost not only would he lose his life but his friends would most likely lose theres. Everything was resting on his shoulders he tried to think of a way to defeat this beast but he couldnt think of any.

"play my pet" the scientest presses a button on the remote and the beast was set free, it ran towards him, he hardly had time to dodge his slashing nails. The beast just kept on coming at him all he could do was dodge the attacks, the beast lept forward, keith dodged then tryed to plunge his dagger in the beast but the beast was to fast and it slashed at his stomach leaving four deep gashes. Keith was pushed to the wall from the shear force, he knew he would have to end this fast because he could see the scientest in the back hooking up wires and cables on his friends earls and jacob had been wired up so fsr.

 keith griped his dagger with all his strength and charged toward the evil chicken man, the beast tryed to smash keiths head with its massive beak but keith ducked below his head and plunged his dagger straight through the beast head. It droped to the floor with a loud thud it was dumping a fountain of blood from the wound. Keith bended down and retrieved his dagger.

"nonononono how could it have lost, lost to a kid.............. No matter time for plan b" the scientest ran to his desk and pulled out a large syrenge.

"what the hell are you doing" keith said as he walked towards
Him, suddenly the scientest plunged the needle in his arm and released the black milky serum into his body. The scientest droped to the floor, it looked like he was siezing his skin started turning green he started getting bigger and buffer his eyes got bige. When the scientest arose he was double the size of keith. He shoke in fear as he saw this frankenstein looking monster. 

"haahaahahaaa you wont survive this, i just pumped my body with concentrated ecto plasim from souls i control" the scientest said in a deep menacing voice. The scientest lift its giant fist it hit keith straight in the stomach and flung him to the wall which he left a full body crater. Keith felt like all the bones in his body were broken, he coughed out a cup of blood. With the strength he had left he raised his rune dagger and stabed it straight in the hand.

"ha dont make me laugh that feels like a misquito bite..... Time to end this" the scientest raised his fist and was ready to throw  his final hit he launched it straight at keiths head all he could do was close his eyes and waited for the hit that would end his life. Keith didnt feel anything he opened his eyes to see what was going on and there was a strong fog int the whole room.

"whats going on here" the scientest said both of them were having a hard time breathing it was icy cold. Keith could see 2 red beaming eyes in the mist. 

"thats it enough playing around the scientest ran forward and threw a punch at keith and in a instant the scientest arm droped to the floor it was cut clean. Keith could see a dark figure in front of him in the way of him and the scientest.

"what the hell not you, i thought i wiped your memory" the scientest said cowardly. The figure turned around to reveal his skelton head. Keith could tell right away who it was and it was the last person he wanted to see The Grim Reaper. 

"take off my hood foolish mortal" the reaper said angrily, keith slowly toke off his hood and handed it to the reaper who equiped it. The reaper raised his scythe at the scientest , the scientest looked in fear.

"take off the amulet before i take off your head" the reaper said.

"hahhaaaaa i didnt go through all this trouble of stealing this from you to have you get it back so easily.... I can control souls now, you dont stand a chance" the scientest said as he reached under his torn up shirt to reveal a strange looking amulet which as soon as he touched glowed. Keith could feel a gust of wind blowing him backwards it toke most of strength to stay where he was. Medium sized orbs appeared around the room and kept multiplying.

"these souls are what gives me ecto plasim, i mixed some ecto plasim with chickens to see what wouldve happen and it created those super chickens you fought but sadly they werent strong enough....... So idecided to mox ecto plasim with chicken DNA and put it in a human which created that chicken man....... When i take care of you two ill make a army of them and rule runescape and there wont be anything anybody can do"the scientest said at the top of his lungs.

"i have been created to make balance between the living and the dead i cant have you be doing this to lost souls" the grim reaper said coldly.

"theres nothing you could do, now souls unleash your fury!!!!" the scientest yelled as he pointed his big finger at the grim reaper. Suddenly all the orbs bolted toward the grim reaper, all the reaper did was raise his hand out and a thin white sphere surronded keith and the reaper, none of the orbs were passing the force field.

"well if i cant get you ill jus get your friends, now souls att..." the grim reaper appeared in the back of the scientest and placed his hand on his shoulders suddenly the scientest droped to the floor. The scientest body revealed slashes all over his body blood was pouring out rapidly. Keith could see the scientest hasping for air.

"dont worry he wont die, im not allowed  to take the lives of mortals without guthix permession, now take your friends and exit the house" the grim reaper said. Keith managed to pull of all the wires and bondages from his friends and walked them all out one at a time. When he brung the past one out keith could see a small fire in the room upstairs.

" thank you mortal for your help i teleported that vile monster to my dungeon" the grim reaper said.

"but how did he manage to take your hood and amulet if you are so strong" keith said confused.

"i had come to this house to collect a soul when i was attacked by the scientest he managed to pull off my hood during th fight and he casted a binding spell.... After he toke off my amulet and wiped my mind so i forgot the location..... But when you killed that poor human i came to collect his soul and that when i saw you and the scientest" the grim reaper said.

"hmmm okaaaaaay" keith said still confused.

" i was wondering if you could come to my house and remove a pesky spider that wont come out of my bath tub" the grim reaper asked.

"uhmm yeah im not good with spiders" keith said.

"hmmmm i see, wrl good bye human hopfully i see you soon" the grim reaper said.

"not to soon" keith said but the reaper had already vanished.
 keith went to the bank and retrieved some food and managed to heal his friends until they gained conscous.

"uhhhh what the hell happned to me, my head hurts like hell" chris said as he rubed his head. Soon melissa and the rest came too and were all wondering just what happned in the house keith tryed to explain the events but they didnt believe him. But keith didnt really care he managed to save his friends from a monster all he wanted to do was rest it was long night. Keith felt calm and for once it was peaceful....................... For now.


                                   THE END


Hope you liked it and if you didnt too bad. Chapter 5 i hope will be out soon.

I like it so far, but the only thing is with just one look I can see mistakes in grammar and spelling. Please run this through Microsoft Word. Alos, try not to make short forms. addy=adamant. GOod Luck on the rest of your story though!

-Wabbit

Is any one going to tell me how they feel about the story if they like it or not?

I will,the story is great and I dont care if there are errors in spelling and all that crud the plot is graet and if I may I would like to make a suggestion,make melissa one of the chosen ones,preferably saras,to add a crazy twist to the story will they kill each other or defie destiny?
then again thats just a suggestion and your doing great on the story without any help so ill shut up. keep up the good work tho this storie is the king of them all!

You mother f...... Lol that was suppose to be a secret i was planning on doing that but im glad there are people out there who like the story so thanks for the feedback. I might hqve to change it so now the sara chosen one could either be chris or melissa youll just have to find out.

You carry a good point, this is a great story. But bad spelling/grammar throws off my reading and makes it hard.

lol ok ill be checking.

Chapter 5!!!!

Keith’s leg were trembling from the sheer force of this beast he wondered if he would be able to run would he have enough time to make it away, and in that moment of thought the beast disappeared.
"booo!!" the beast yelled Keith turned around just in time to see the blade inching closer to his stomach Keith moved as quick as he could but he suffered a deep slash to his side.

"uuuhhhhhhhhhh, what are you, you were a demon now you look human....How the hell do you know flash step too" Keith said as he gasped for air.

"no time talk, only fight" the beast said rushing at keith, he pulled out his blade and defended himself from all the blows the monster was serving. Keith could see the beast was enjoying himself. Keith didn’t know how much longer he could block for, he was getting tired he knew he had to go on the offense he flash steped to the back of beast and managed to slash him on the back around the shoulder blade.

"uhh nice, finally a good fight" the beast said right before he tried to slashat him but keith put his sword out to block it. They were blade to blade exerting all there force. Keith relized that his sword
was being forced back, he knew if he stayed there that he might get cut so he jumped back.

" hahahahaa fight me like a man" the beast roared.

"im only 16....." Keith said quietly.

"good enough" the beast said right before he launched forward like a missile his blade in front of him pointing towards Keith. Keith managed to flash step right next to him and slashed him two times in the on the chest but the beast countered back and slashed him on his back. They both leapt away from each other as they examined there wounds.
"that was pretty good your speed is increasing looks like I’m gon....." right before the beast could finish Keith lunged forward and tried to stab him but the beast was too fast. Keith dropped to the floor with a
stab wound to the left of his abdomen, he started to gasp for air as blood filled his lungs.

" looks like I’m done here" the beast said and started to walk toward the unconscious girl. Keith didn’t want to give up but the pain was too unbearable he couldn’t even stand up.

"haha looks like you need my help again, tsk tsk" the voice said in Keith’s head, his body rose off the ground his eyes started to glow red, red markings started to appear on his body. The ground started to tremble, the beast quickly turned around as he could felt the immense power.

"hahaahaaa the kid gave up, now it’s my turn and I don’t have mercy on the weak" Keith said in a menacing voice.

"ooo a Zamorak just like me, this is going to get fun" the beast said and ran toward Keith and tried to hit a strong blow but Keith blocked it as if it was nothing. He tried again and again but Keith was kept parrying the blows making it look easy.

"hahahahaha that’s all you got I don’t know how the kid lost to you"

"you want more ill bump it up to 30%, I hate to disappoint" the beast roared.

"whaaaa you weren’t at full strength" Keith said cowardly his eyes were wide, from the expression on his face you could tell he was worried but he didn’t back down.

The beast body started to illuminate red, Keith could feel the power creep on him so he readied himself when the red light diminished you could tell the beast had increased in size, this time the beast had little spikes coming out of his forearm that were deadly sharp.

"fire blast" the demon shouted and with a mighty swing of his sword fire burst out heading straight for keith tried to use the wind created from the swipe of his sword to try and blow the fire away but it didn’t
make a difference. The fire scorched his chest; the shirt he was wearing had burned away.
“what the hell, the burn on your chest disappeared” the beast said shakily, he was right the burn on his chest had been healed and nothing was left to even identify if there was a burn there. Keith launched forward he landed in front of the beast and he tried to take a swipe at him with is sword but before he could land it the beast gave him a hard backhand to his face sending him flying to a tree.
"that’s it enough of this crap this ends now, stop playing around i know you are stronger I want a good fight, now go full strength and ill go to full strength I’m tired of playing these games" the beast shouted.

"Hahaha you want you got it” Keith said; each of them toke a stance the air around both of them was swirling around like a tornado. The air was denser any human who was there would have surely suffocated. When the tornado diminished both of them had red static pulsating there body. The young lady awoke to find two things fighting in front of her she couldn’t tell which one was good or bad as they both looked menacing, both of them had a evil grin on their face she soon realized that she was having a hard time breathing she choked for air but the air was too dense she looked around and saw the young boy. She quickly grabbed him and tried to run to a reasonable distance than collapsed her body had given up due the lack of oxygen but she was far away from the fight. She greedily gulped down big breathes of oxygen.

"Now the real party starts" the beast said as he toke his stance.

" No the party is just ending and this is where you end" Keith shouted and rushed forward, light was
emanating from the dragon long sword he was wielding, the beast soon folowed his example and they were both running at full speed toward each other, both of their blades glowed dark red as if they were stained with blood. They got a couple inches away from each other and toke a mighty swing they both parried each other’s attack but as soon as the two blades touched a big explosion erupted sending them both back flying.

Each of them were badly injured Keith was bleeding from his right arm and he suffered a deep cut above his eyes he smashed into a tree which softened his blow but every bone felt like it was smashed. The beast was flying his legs were grinding against the rocky ground, the top part of his mask was cracked revealing nothing but blackness.

When the dust settled down Keith was crouching on the floor holding his arm which was badly cut up the blood ran down his arm and dripped from his hand. The beast was struggling to get up, because of the deep gashes on his legs, but he managed to stand with a pool of blood surrounding him.
“uhhh you mother fuu..” the beast shouted but was soon cut off as Keith flash stepped forward right in front of the beast. Keith Quickly grasped the beast head, the beast wanted to do something but all of his body was mangled up it toke all of his strength to just stand.
“hahahahaha I finally found a opponent that is strong enough for my full strength, I a elder demon suffered a defeat from a little kid hahahaha” the beast said as he was throwing up blood.

“hahaha best thing is im not at even at 80% strength” Keith said smiling, the beast looked up.
“Farewell, la muerta ha colpitoo!!!!” Keith shouted and his hand eliminated, the beast let out a scream as the blast hit face. When it was down the headless body of what’s left of the beast dropped to the floor then it caught aflame in burned until nothing was left but ashes. Keith looked to the left from him and saw a beautiful young lady he let out a menacing grin.
“Looks like I got a new plaything” Keith said cold, the lady couldn’t believe her eyes some boy just obliterated that things head just by touching him. She knew she had to get far away as she could see the boy looking at her and his smile gave her goose bumps she quickly picked up the kid and was about to run but as soon as she turned around the boy was standing right there in front of her she paused in fear she could feel some strange thing weighing her down. As she looked into the boys red eyes she felt fear like none before.
“And what is your name” Keith said as he grabbed the girls hand and kissed it, but the girl was frozen in fear.
“you don’t like to talk…… me either, how about we play a game” Keith said as he unsheathed his sword and pointed it directly in the girls face.
“you run and let’s see how long it takes for me to catch you” Keith said grinning


here is chapter 5 i know its can of short but ill make the next chapter longer so dont cry hopfully you like it.