Hey everybody, this is my first fake. Rate 1/10

I know it's old, but I did it a while ago and this is my first time posting.

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For a first time faker, it's a nice concept but I think the text is way to far up in the textbox, and the zombie is lighter than your character. So I give it a 7/10, keep on making more and take a look around other member's fakes, you learn.

Thanks for the tips!
And great help, I never noticed the zombie's lightness. And now that you mention it, I did notice something weird about the textbox, but I didn't know what.

It's all right for a first-timer, and yeah always look back at what your doing.

Anyways take a look at the Screenshot fakes forum, you can learn a lot from other fakers.

http://runescape.salmoneus.net/forums/index.php?showforum=25

Well, he asked for it. 1/10.

...I think he meant "Rate out of 10," or "Rate -/10," or "Rate X/10." Then again, I was tempted myself to rate him 1/10, but...

Anyhow, for my rating...

-1 The chatbox is wayyyy too dark. I take it that you used the old Group Faking Kit chatbox, which isn't good because when you took a screenshot from in-game and pasted a bit of the game's chatbox into your fake, it looks lighter than the rest of the chatbox.

-1 The text in the chatbox should start out at the bottom, and text is in the bottom part if text is in the top part. Your text is waaaaay at the top. And is the "W" too small?

-1 The zombie has no shadow, is horridly out of place, and looks too light. (Is it in SD, and your background in HD?)

-0 Not much of a storyline, but I won't take off points. (And if you have 62 hitpoints and a zombie's first attack doesn't even take one of them, why would you say, "Well, this isn't good?")

-0 Old interface, etc.

+1 First fake.

8/10

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Zombie looks like a copy-paste taken from an environment that was lighted differently (or was from another graphic setting) and the text starts at the bottom when you first log in.

5/10

-1 The zombie has no shadow.
-1 Old hitsplats and hp bar. You probably used an old kit, maybe the GFK. Here's the GFK 2.0, make sure not to post in it. It's back on the 5th page (bump)
-1.5 The chatbox is missaligned, has the asterisk at the end, and in the wrong place and everything.
+1 First fake.

7.5/10 Great job.

i can see the hand thrue the rock >.> 6.5/10

-1 Text should be from the bottom up, not from the top down
-0.5 Text spacing is too far
-1 Zombie's lack of shadow, and very inaccurate lighting

Other than that, there's really nothing wrong with it. I choose not to take off points for being the old interface... It's not like you're a fail faker because your fakes are old...

7.5/10

NO WAY@ So smrt loly


Anyway, rated 3/10. you can do better.

7/10