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#741 OFFLINE   Buland

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Posted 07 January 2010 - 05:14 AM

View PostFake, on Jan 7 2010, 02:33 AM, said:

Rouge has taken a very big turn from being my favorite character to like second place -.-.
Whose first place now?

View Postrabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 7 2010, 03:04 AM, said:

Holy crap that's a good chapter. And you realize I'm typing through tears :) Now where the colon... ohhh... : here's the only grammar mistake I found;(dangit where's shift!)

"Its Rouge. I... miss him."

Zomg! I found the same mistake Luna found! Lol(Why am I laughing and crying at the same time?)! Its->It's no?

Anyway, that was an extremely good chapter, and I am skimming through the previous chapters to see how Rouge is connected to the essence :P

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Posted 07 January 2010 - 02:49 PM

So, Rouge... isn't dead? But is it even Rouge? I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Posted 07 January 2010 - 06:33 PM

View PostBuland, on Jan 7 2010, 05:14 AM, said:

View PostFake, on Jan 7 2010, 02:33 AM, said:

Rouge has taken a very big turn from being my favorite character to like second place -.- .
Whose first place now?

I'll tell you when I figure it out.
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Posted 09 January 2010 - 01:55 AM

-.- That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...

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Posted 09 January 2010 - 10:02 AM

View PostLuna, on Jan 9 2010, 01:55 AM, said:

-.- That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...


Luna, you're funny. :)
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Posted 09 January 2010 - 12:38 PM

View Postrabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 9 2010, 08:02 PM, said:

View PostLuna, on Jan 9 2010, 01:55 AM, said:

:) That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...


Luna, you're funny. :P
She is, isn't she? -.-

Just for the record, I don't consider myself a hopeless romantic. Sure, I can be imaginative, but I am in no way in love with love! I honestly thought my audience would like it in the story. :P

Oh and, by the way, I'd be happy to see Drewe in your story. :) But please do make one! I liked Zamorak's Hand, because I thought it had the potential to be great, and now I see you've improved so dramatically in English that another story should be inevitable (RuneScape story that is)!

Rouge is in The Rise of Darkness and The Dark Essence. Should we make a thread in which people post a character, with full personality details, then the authors could use them, or 'hire' them, for their story? Like a cast. Then, the entire RuneScape Stories section would be saying, "I like Rouge!" or "Drewe's my favourite character in all the stories!" I know, it sounds really weird since professional and full-time authors would never do such a thing. But then again, our way of narrating a story is also different from how they do it in reality. Anyone? Good idea, no? Or if its a horribly bad idea, I'd like to understand why!

Edited by Buland, 09 January 2010 - 12:47 PM.

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Posted 09 January 2010 - 12:41 PM

View PostBuland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:38 PM, said:

View Postrabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 9 2010, 08:02 PM, said:

View PostLuna, on Jan 9 2010, 01:55 AM, said:

:) That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...


Luna, you're funny. :P
She is, isn't she? -.-

Just for the record, I don't consider myself a hopeless romantic. Sure, I can be imaginative, but I am in no way in love with love! I honestly thought my audience would like it in the story. :P

Damn, I saw you post and in all honesty I was hoping that the chapter would be delivered right now. :)

EDIT: Psst, new chapter in my story, Psst.

Edited by Fake, 09 January 2010 - 12:41 PM.

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Posted 09 January 2010 - 12:55 PM

View PostFake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

View PostBuland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:38 PM, said:

View Postrabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 9 2010, 08:02 PM, said:

View PostLuna, on Jan 9 2010, 01:55 AM, said:

:) That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...


Luna, you're funny. :P
She is, isn't she? -.-

Just for the record, I don't consider myself a hopeless romantic. Sure, I can be imaginative, but I am in no way in love with love! I honestly thought my audience would like it in the story. :P

Damn, I saw you post and in all honesty I was hoping that the chapter would be delivered right now. :P
It will come in due time. Also, I edited my previous post and want your opinion.

View PostFake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

EDIT: Psst, new chapter in my story, Psst.
I was just about to go and read it until I saw you posted in my story. :)

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Posted 09 January 2010 - 12:57 PM

View PostBuland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:55 PM, said:

View PostFake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

View PostBuland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:38 PM, said:

View Postrabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 9 2010, 08:02 PM, said:

View PostLuna, on Jan 9 2010, 01:55 AM, said:

:) That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...


Luna, you're funny. :P
She is, isn't she? -.-

Just for the record, I don't consider myself a hopeless romantic. Sure, I can be imaginative, but I am in no way in love with love! I honestly thought my audience would like it in the story. :P

Damn, I saw you post and in all honesty I was hoping that the chapter would be delivered right now. :P
It will come in due time. Also, I edited my previous post and want your opinion.

View PostFake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

EDIT: Psst, new chapter in my story, Psst.
I was just about to go and read it until I saw you posted in my story. :)
Finway made something like that, we can revive his topic and get his stickied.
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Posted 09 January 2010 - 01:09 PM

View PostFake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:57 PM, said:

View PostBuland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:55 PM, said:

View PostFake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

View PostBuland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:38 PM, said:

View Postrabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 9 2010, 08:02 PM, said:

View PostLuna, on Jan 9 2010, 01:55 AM, said:

:) That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...


Luna, you're funny. :P
She is, isn't she? -.-

Just for the record, I don't consider myself a hopeless romantic. Sure, I can be imaginative, but I am in no way in love with love! I honestly thought my audience would like it in the story. :P

Damn, I saw you post and in all honesty I was hoping that the chapter would be delivered right now. :P
It will come in due time. Also, I edited my previous post and want your opinion.

View PostFake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

EDIT: Psst, new chapter in my story, Psst.
I was just about to go and read it until I saw you posted in my story. :)
Finway made something like that, we can revive his topic and get his stickied.
We should. And we should change it a bit too. Like the idea I suggested, but only if people are fine with it. :P

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Posted 09 January 2010 - 08:12 PM

View PostBuland, on Jan 10 2010, 02:09 AM, said:

View PostFake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:57 PM, said:

View PostBuland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:55 PM, said:

View PostFake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

View PostBuland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:38 PM, said:

View Postrabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 9 2010, 08:02 PM, said:

View PostLuna, on Jan 9 2010, 01:55 AM, said:

:) That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...


Luna, you're funny. :P
She is, isn't she? -.-

Just for the record, I don't consider myself a hopeless romantic. Sure, I can be imaginative, but I am in no way in love with love! I honestly thought my audience would like it in the story. :P

Damn, I saw you post and in all honesty I was hoping that the chapter would be delivered right now. :P
It will come in due time. Also, I edited my previous post and want your opinion.

View PostFake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

EDIT: Psst, new chapter in my story, Psst.
I was just about to go and read it until I saw you posted in my story. :P
Finway made something like that, we can revive his topic and get his stickied.
We should. And we should change it a bit too. Like the idea I suggested, but only if people are fine with it. :P

It's a great idea. We should do it as soon as possible. Fake starts, perhaps?  :)

To be honest, I did like the sad tone Nelson's death and Seren's confession added to the story; you just did the same for the Fall of Gielinor, but with reversed roles. It's a bit redundant, and could be improved.

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Posted 10 January 2010 - 12:05 PM

View PostLuna, on Jan 10 2010, 06:12 AM, said:

View PostBuland, on Jan 10 2010, 02:09 AM, said:

View PostFake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:57 PM, said:

View PostBuland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:55 PM, said:

View PostFake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

View PostBuland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:38 PM, said:

View Postrabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 9 2010, 08:02 PM, said:

View PostLuna, on Jan 9 2010, 01:55 AM, said:

:) That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...


Luna, you're funny. :P
She is, isn't she? -.-

Just for the record, I don't consider myself a hopeless romantic. Sure, I can be imaginative, but I am in no way in love with love! I honestly thought my audience would like it in the story. :D

Damn, I saw you post and in all honesty I was hoping that the chapter would be delivered right now. :P
It will come in due time. Also, I edited my previous post and want your opinion.

View PostFake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

EDIT: Psst, new chapter in my story, Psst.
I was just about to go and read it until I saw you posted in my story. :P
Finway made something like that, we can revive his topic and get his stickied.
We should. And we should change it a bit too. Like the idea I suggested, but only if people are fine with it. :P

It's a great idea. We should do it as soon as possible. Fake starts, perhaps?  :)
That, or we can revive Finway's topic and tell him to make the necessary changes.

View PostLuna, on Jan 10 2010, 06:12 AM, said:

To be honest, I did like the sad tone Nelson's death and Seren's confession added to the story; you just did the same for the Fall of Gielinor, but with reversed roles. It's a bit redundant, and could be improved.
With criticism comes improvement. :P

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Posted 12 January 2010 - 12:36 AM

That is a fantastic chapter it was very sad :)  as well as interesting finding out about Rouges connection to the essence -.-
keep sending in those chapters. :P











By the way do you still have any plans for my character :)


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Posted 12 January 2010 - 07:17 AM

I think I know who got the King Black Dragon's essence now! -.- It's just a guess, but I'm willing to bet on it.

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Posted 13 January 2010 - 11:05 PM

What a cliff hanger :)
Read the whole story today :P
great story.
Write more NOW (please? -.-)

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Posted 15 January 2010 - 11:02 PM

View PostLuna, on Jan 12 2010, 08:17 AM, said:

I think I know who got the King Black Dragon's essence now! -.- It's just a guess, but I'm willing to bet on it.

I'm going to share my guess. Zaros.
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Posted 16 January 2010 - 04:50 AM

View Postrabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 16 2010, 12:02 PM, said:

View PostLuna, on Jan 12 2010, 08:17 AM, said:

I think I know who got the King Black Dragon's essence now! :) It's just a guess, but I'm willing to bet on it.

I'm going to share my guess. Zaros.

I was thinking that Nelson was actually an avatar of Rouge's, of sorts. -.-

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Posted 16 January 2010 - 07:25 AM

I think that Rouge was an Avatar of Zaros -.-


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Posted 12 February 2010 - 07:44 AM

Oh dear, it seems Buland has zoned out again. Buland, are you there?

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Posted 16 February 2010 - 07:55 AM

View PostLuna, on Feb 12 2010, 07:44 AM, said:

Oh dear, it seems Buland has zoned out again. Buland, are you there?

He PMed me yesterday, so he's probably still furioiusly writing.
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