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[Buland]

Fake, on Jan 7 2010, 02:33 AM, said:

Rouge has taken a very big turn from being my favorite character to like second place .

Whose first place now?

rabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 7 2010, 03:04 AM, said:

Holy crap that's a good chapter. And you realize I'm typing through tears Now where the colon... ohhh... : here's the only grammar mistake I found;(dangit where's shift!)

"Its Rouge. I... miss him."

Zomg! I found the same mistake Luna found! Lol(Why am I laughing and crying at the same time?)! Its->It's no?

Anyway, that was an extremely good chapter, and I am skimming through the previous chapters to see how Rouge is connected to the essence

-Wabbit

It isn't mentioned in the previous chapters. Everything will be revealed before the end! The Essence, in fact, is related to an event which happened a long time ago in RuneScape's history. That's all I can tell, for now.

[Essilen]

So, Rouge... isn't dead? But is it even Rouge? I can't wait for the next chapter!

[Lifted]

Buland, on Jan 7 2010, 05:14 AM, said:

Fake, on Jan 7 2010, 02:33 AM, said:

Rouge has taken a very big turn from being my favorite character to like second place .

Whose first place now?

I'll tell you when I figure it out.

[Luna]

That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...

[-CoSMIC Gears-]

Luna, on Jan 9 2010, 01:55 AM, said:

That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...

Luna, you're funny.

[Buland]

rabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 9 2010, 08:02 PM, said:

Luna, on Jan 9 2010, 01:55 AM, said:

That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...

Luna, you're funny.

She is, isn't she?

Just for the record, I don't consider myself a hopeless romantic. Sure, I can be imaginative, but I am in no way in love with love! I honestly thought my audience would like it in the story.

Oh and, by the way, I'd be happy to see Drewe in your story. But please do make one! I liked Zamorak's Hand, because I thought it had the potential to be great, and now I see you've improved so dramatically in English that another story should be inevitable (RuneScape story that is)!

Rouge is in The Rise of Darkness and The Dark Essence. Should we make a thread in which people post a character, with full personality details, then the authors could use them, or 'hire' them, for their story? Like a cast. Then, the entire RuneScape Stories section would be saying, "I like Rouge!" or "Drewe's my favourite character in all the stories!" I know, it sounds really weird since professional and full-time authors would never do such a thing. But then again, our way of narrating a story is also different from how they do it in reality. Anyone? Good idea, no? Or if its a horribly bad idea, I'd like to understand why!

Edited by Buland, 09 January 2010 - 12:47 PM.

[Lifted]

Buland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:38 PM, said:

rabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 9 2010, 08:02 PM, said:

Luna, on Jan 9 2010, 01:55 AM, said:

That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...

Luna, you're funny.

She is, isn't she?

Just for the record, I don't consider myself a hopeless romantic. Sure, I can be imaginative, but I am in no way in love with love! I honestly thought my audience would like it in the story.

Damn, I saw you post and in all honesty I was hoping that the chapter would be delivered right now.

EDIT: Psst, new chapter in my story, Psst.

Edited by Fake, 09 January 2010 - 12:41 PM.

[Buland]

Fake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

Buland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:38 PM, said:

rabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 9 2010, 08:02 PM, said:

Luna, on Jan 9 2010, 01:55 AM, said:

That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...

Luna, you're funny.

She is, isn't she?

Just for the record, I don't consider myself a hopeless romantic. Sure, I can be imaginative, but I am in no way in love with love! I honestly thought my audience would like it in the story.

Damn, I saw you post and in all honesty I was hoping that the chapter would be delivered right now.

It will come in due time. Also, I edited my previous post and want your opinion.

Fake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

EDIT: Psst, new chapter in my story, Psst.

I was just about to go and read it until I saw you posted in my story.

[Lifted]

Buland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:55 PM, said:

Fake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

Buland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:38 PM, said:

rabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 9 2010, 08:02 PM, said:

Luna, on Jan 9 2010, 01:55 AM, said:

That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...

Luna, you're funny.

She is, isn't she?

Just for the record, I don't consider myself a hopeless romantic. Sure, I can be imaginative, but I am in no way in love with love! I honestly thought my audience would like it in the story.

Damn, I saw you post and in all honesty I was hoping that the chapter would be delivered right now.

It will come in due time. Also, I edited my previous post and want your opinion.

Fake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

EDIT: Psst, new chapter in my story, Psst.

I was just about to go and read it until I saw you posted in my story.

Finway made something like that, we can revive his topic and get his stickied.

[Buland]

Fake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:57 PM, said:

Buland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:55 PM, said:

Fake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

Buland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:38 PM, said:

rabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 9 2010, 08:02 PM, said:

Luna, on Jan 9 2010, 01:55 AM, said:

That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...

Luna, you're funny.

She is, isn't she?

Just for the record, I don't consider myself a hopeless romantic. Sure, I can be imaginative, but I am in no way in love with love! I honestly thought my audience would like it in the story.

Damn, I saw you post and in all honesty I was hoping that the chapter would be delivered right now.

It will come in due time. Also, I edited my previous post and want your opinion.

Fake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

EDIT: Psst, new chapter in my story, Psst.

I was just about to go and read it until I saw you posted in my story.

Finway made something like that, we can revive his topic and get his stickied.

We should. And we should change it a bit too. Like the idea I suggested, but only if people are fine with it.

[Luna]

Buland, on Jan 10 2010, 02:09 AM, said:

Fake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:57 PM, said:

Buland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:55 PM, said:

Fake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

Buland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:38 PM, said:

rabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 9 2010, 08:02 PM, said:

Luna, on Jan 9 2010, 01:55 AM, said:

That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...

Luna, you're funny.

She is, isn't she?

Just for the record, I don't consider myself a hopeless romantic. Sure, I can be imaginative, but I am in no way in love with love! I honestly thought my audience would like it in the story.

Damn, I saw you post and in all honesty I was hoping that the chapter would be delivered right now.

It will come in due time. Also, I edited my previous post and want your opinion.

Fake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

EDIT: Psst, new chapter in my story, Psst.

I was just about to go and read it until I saw you posted in my story.

Finway made something like that, we can revive his topic and get his stickied.

We should. And we should change it a bit too. Like the idea I suggested, but only if people are fine with it.

It's a great idea. We should do it as soon as possible. Fake starts, perhaps?  

To be honest, I did like the sad tone Nelson's death and Seren's confession added to the story; you just did the same for the Fall of Gielinor, but with reversed roles. It's a bit redundant, and could be improved.

[Buland]

Luna, on Jan 10 2010, 06:12 AM, said:

Buland, on Jan 10 2010, 02:09 AM, said:

Fake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:57 PM, said:

Buland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:55 PM, said:

Fake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

Buland, on Jan 9 2010, 12:38 PM, said:

rabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 9 2010, 08:02 PM, said:

Luna, on Jan 9 2010, 01:55 AM, said:

That's not how I wanted Drewe to turn out! He's supposed to be more sensible and grounded! I should have been more specific!

...Ah, well, it's not like I have any rights to him anymore. Buland, in the unlikely case of my ever starting another story, can I use (at least partially) his character?

Nelson's sacrifice was quite interesting, but you've really shown your true colors, Buland. You're a hopeless romantic.

However, it's as great as usual. I really found the part where Rouge would die again and again a bit funny...

Luna, you're funny.

She is, isn't she?

Just for the record, I don't consider myself a hopeless romantic. Sure, I can be imaginative, but I am in no way in love with love! I honestly thought my audience would like it in the story.

Damn, I saw you post and in all honesty I was hoping that the chapter would be delivered right now.

It will come in due time. Also, I edited my previous post and want your opinion.

Fake, on Jan 9 2010, 10:41 PM, said:

EDIT: Psst, new chapter in my story, Psst.

I was just about to go and read it until I saw you posted in my story.

Finway made something like that, we can revive his topic and get his stickied.

We should. And we should change it a bit too. Like the idea I suggested, but only if people are fine with it.

It's a great idea. We should do it as soon as possible. Fake starts, perhaps?  

That, or we can revive Finway's topic and tell him to make the necessary changes.

Luna, on Jan 10 2010, 06:12 AM, said:

To be honest, I did like the sad tone Nelson's death and Seren's confession added to the story; you just did the same for the Fall of Gielinor, but with reversed roles. It's a bit redundant, and could be improved.

With criticism comes improvement.

[delred]

That is a fantastic chapter it was very sad   as well as interesting finding out about Rouges connection to the essence
keep sending in those chapters.











By the way do you still have any plans for my character

[Luna]

I think I know who got the King Black Dragon's essence now! It's just a guess, but I'm willing to bet on it.

[Lupus Flamma V]

What a cliff hanger
Read the whole story today
great story.
Write more NOW (please? )

~Wolf

Edited by Lupus Flamma V, 14 January 2010 - 11:02 AM.

[-CoSMIC Gears-]

Luna, on Jan 12 2010, 08:17 AM, said:

I think I know who got the King Black Dragon's essence now! It's just a guess, but I'm willing to bet on it.

I'm going to share my guess. Zaros.

[Luna]

rabbitfuzzy0, on Jan 16 2010, 12:02 PM, said:

Luna, on Jan 12 2010, 08:17 AM, said:

I think I know who got the King Black Dragon's essence now! It's just a guess, but I'm willing to bet on it.

I'm going to share my guess. Zaros.

I was thinking that Nelson was actually an avatar of Rouge's, of sorts.

[delred]

I think that Rouge was an Avatar of Zaros

[Luna]

Oh dear, it seems Buland has zoned out again. Buland, are you there?

[-CoSMIC Gears-]

Luna, on Feb 12 2010, 07:44 AM, said:

Oh dear, it seems Buland has zoned out again. Buland, are you there?

He PMed me yesterday, so he's probably still furioiusly writing.