Yes I will. I read it and I noticed several more errors and corrected them. The speech has to be 5 minutes long too, and when I timed myself, I averaged around 3 minutes. I'll update this topic later after adding some more to it
The topic is "If I were Leader of the Free World the first issue I would address would be..." The part that I need help with is
1. Where do I start a new paragraph?
2. Do I have any grammar mistakes?
3. What to name it?