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Song I Wrote!

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Yes, this is probably pretty emo and bad, but it as deep as I can go so be as brutally honest as possible:

 

Humpback lier

Faceless prayers

Vacant emotions wish their way thru our veins

Seedless statue

Velvet tattoo

Shivering energy licks its way thru our needs

 

Waiting by the stairway

Bundled in the alley

Pulsing thru the cliche

Everything is ok

 

Endless hour

Friend on fire

Seeping their way thru the wallowing tides

Lost in meadows

Moonlit shadows

Kissing their way to the front of the line

 

Waiting by the stairway

Bundled in the alley

Pulsing thru the cliche

Everything is ok

 

That pale smile will hold you young

Hold you down in an iron lung

That flickered glimmer will hold you here

Until you're drained of all your tears

 

Waiting by the stairway

Trapped inside the alley

Pulsing thru the cliche

Everything is going to be ok

Everything is going to be ok

Everything is going to be ok

Everything is going to be ok

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Here's my advice

 

With a song that good, you should join and/or form a band

Write more songs

Make it into an album

THIS IS THE HARD PART:Hope that your album sells

Bask in riches, Nude girls E.T.C

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Ok, I updated it a small amount.

 

Humpback angel

Faceless wonders

Vacant feelings wish their way to the moon

Sleeping statue

Velvet tattoo

Shattering energy licks its way thru our lungs

 

Waiting by the stairway

Bundled in the alley

Pulsing thru the cliche

Everything is ok

 

Endless hour

Friend on fire

Punching their way thru the wallowing tides

Lost in meadows

Fading shadows

Kissing their way to the front of the line

 

Waiting by the stairway

Bundled in the alley

Pulsing thru the cliche

Everything is ok

 

That pale smile will hold you young

Sew you down in an iron lung

That flickered glimmer will hold you here

Until you're drained of all your tears

 

Waiting by the stairway

Trapped inside the alley

Pulsing thru the cliche

Everything is ok

When you're facing my way

Everything is ok

Until you fade away

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This is hilarious.

 

Make more plez.

 

It wasn't made to be funny...

 

Anyway, I like the song, but couldn't really get a tune to it. My favourite part is below, it really makes me feel really good. :aware:

 

When you're facing my way

Everything is ok

Until you fade away

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When writing lyrics for a song. You must imagine how the song will go or at least how it would fit else your gunna end up in a mess.

i hope if you do another song it's a bit more cheery :aware:

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