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Hello!

 

I need to make a song and it HAS to start with,

I woke up this morning

 

 

Can somebody help me please?

 

Thanks!

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A song, or just the lyrics?

 

(There's a difference. :aware:)

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Rip off Ben Lee's "We're All In This Together". :aware:

 

I suggest you write a simple blues song. Works well with the first line and the melody can be bland and very repetitive if you'd like.

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I'll write a brilliant one for you.

 

I woke up this morning

To a star imploding in the trees

Caught outside my window

It rained next to me and we danced

Acid fire wondered why

We ever gave it the chance to die

Breathe into everything you see

And build yourself to ask me

Why I wonder and why I try

I woke up this morning to a fallen tree

And wondered why it wasn't me

 

There you go, dude. Brilliance.

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I woke up this morning

With a pain in my back

The pain lingered on

Burning ember

I woke up this morning

To an awful delight

I never wondered at all until

I woke up this morning

 

For melody, play around with this chord progression.

 

D - G - Fsharp - Csharp

Edited by Gavin

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I worked hard on this:

 

I woke up this morning

And I was feelin' fine

I lay in bead adoring the morning gray sky

But then I looked at my clock and relized it was nine

 

I woke up this morning

And I was feelin' fine

Now is four o'clock

and I aint feelin' fine

 

What happened to the happiness

It all went out the door

What happened to the happiness

In won't come back no more

 

oooo shobedoo shobedo wapwap oooo shobedo shobedo wapwap

 

I woke up this morning

And I was feelin' fine

I lay in bead adoring the morning gray sky

But then I looked at my clock and relized it was nine

 

I woke up this morning

And I was feelin' fine

Now is four o'clock

and I'm scrubin' floors

 

What happened to the happiness

It all went out the door

What happened to the happiness

In won't come back no more

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Up in the morning and out to school

Mother says there'll be no work next year

Qualifications once the Golden Rule

Are now just pieces of paper

 

Just because you're better than me

Doesn't mean I'm lazy

Just because you're going forwards

Doesn't mean I'm going backwards

 

If you look the part you'll get the job

In last year's trousers and your old school shoes

The truth is son, it's a buyer's market

They can afford to pick and choose

 

Just because you're better than me

Doesn't mean I'm lazy

Just because I dress like this

Doesn't mean I'm a communist

 

The factories are closing and the army's full -

I don't know what I'm going to do

But I've come to see in the Land of the Free

There's only a future for the Chosen Few

 

Just because you're better than me

Doesn't mean I'm lazy

Just because you're going forwards

Doesn't mean I'm going backwards

 

At twenty one you're on top of the scrapheap

At sixteen you were top of the class

All they taught you at school

Was how to be a good worker

The system has failed you, don't fail yourself

 

Just because you're better than me

Doesn't mean I'm lazy

Just because you're going forwards

Doesn't mean I'm going backwards

 

 

 

 

 

 

I swear I didn't copy that :aware:

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whoa ur better at songwriting than me...i just thought of:

 

i woke up this morning feeling fine

couldnt think cuz i had a lot on my mind

went out into the daily grind

worked hard as i could, up till 9

Edited by albinogecko1

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good melody find a keyboard!

 

b-b-f#-f#-e

 

e-e-f#-d-c#

 

b-d-b-e

 

b-d-b-e-d

 

just mess around in A major ur bound to get sumfin

 

enjoy!

 

note for the left havd do

 

B on the bottom and F# on top

 

then a on the bottom and e on top

 

then g on the bottm and d on top

 

then a on the bottom and e on top

 

REPEAT THROUGHT OUT

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