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The two hands seem to need a retake too..

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Capitalise "Assisst System".

 

Fix the map showing routes so that the key has "Draynor" capitalised.

OR you can just click on the altar if your trusty Air Tiara is equipped.

Cut out the "trusty". It's unnecessary and a nonessential characteristic of an Air Tiara.

Once you reach the inside of the air alter (whew you made it!) you will see numerous people shouting out "#x Assist" meaning that you make #x the airs per rune essence.

Take out the parenthetical "Whew you made it". Be consistent and always use the term "#x". Spell altar correctly here and throughout the guide.

When you see someone saying "Yx assist!" you may right click on them and click assist

Once again, use "#x" and say "click 'Assisst'". Note the capitalisation and apostrophes.

After being assisted, you click on the air alter when you see two hands shaking with each other on the bottom right hand-corner of the screen.

Spell "Altar" correctly, again. Add a comma between "assissted" and "you".

Getting assisted isn't a walk in the park, or maybe it is. But There are a few people out there that aren't as truthful as they seem to be when running. Make sure you always check their stats on high scores before you are being assisted by the other person as you may be getting tricked into getting assisted by someone with level 1 Runecrafting.

Take out the scratched-out bit of the first two sentences and add "when running" after "be" as shown. Add a comma between "person" and "as".

When being assisted you will get a screen with pink writing in it like so.

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Put a colon after "so".

At this point you may wish to click and assist the one in need.

Of course you're going to assisst them when they ask, duh!

There it is your inventory, you need absolutely nothing at all but may wish to bring a air talisman in case you don't have a air tiara.

Rewrite the sentence so it says "You need nothing in your inventory, but...". Remember to use "an" when referring to words that start with a vowel or vowel sound, i.e. "air". Check this throughout the guide. Do it very carefully.

You may still use the old method of Runecrafting of paying with cash and giving back essence. All you have to do is stand in the alter and say "open 2k" but this isn't advised as you can only use it every 15 minutes which isn't useful at all, as you will not be getting the most out of your journey, which is getting exp from Runecrafting.

Spell "altar" correctly. Take out the last bit as shown. Take out the comma between "at all" and "as you".

Always be truthful when assisting others, if you aren't, this will lead to being flamed and hated by many players who trusted you and wanted to get the most out of 27-28 rune essence, while you get experience.

Insert a comma between "aren't" and "this".

 

Please credit me on this guide as "Mephistopheles", as I did a crapload of work on Donzie's old guide as well as what I just did here.

 

Good luck. It's nearing completion, but not quite.

 

HEY! i remember you! you were really good at fixing my mistakes on my old guide :) i forgot to credit you though :aware: sorry but yeh its looking better than ever!

 

~donzie guy19

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Blurred out names:

 

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(You don't want to get randomly PMed in game a lot. Trust me. :))

 

Ok thanks for the pictures.

 

Roy thany-you too.

 

~Hybrid :aware:

Edited by Hybrid Guy19

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Here are a few more. Change the subtitle to something like "98% done", please.

 

PLEASE REMAKE THE MAP SHOWING ROUTES TO THE ALTAR. "DRAYNOR" MUST BE CAPITALISED IN THE KEY

 

 

 

Lets take a look at the method.

Take this out. Of course you're going to look at the method. This is what the guide's for, nu?

Always be truthful when assisting others, if you aren't, this will lead to being flamed and hated by many players who trusted you and wanted to get the most out of 27-28 rune essence, while you get experience.

Split this into two sentences. Put a period after "others" instead of a comma and capitalise "If". Take out the comma between "essence" and "while". Change "get experience" to "got experience".

You need nothing in your inventory, but may wish to bring a air talisman in case you don't have an air tiara.

You missed the article here. Change "a air talisman" to "an air talisman".

When being assisted, you will get a screen with pink writing in it like so:

Add a comma between "assissted" and "you".

 

For your section title "How to Get There", take off the question mark. The statement you are making is not a question.

When you see someone saying "#x assist!" you may right click on them and 'Click Assist'

What I meant with this correction that only "Assisst" should have apostrophes around it. Not "'Click Assisst'", write "Click 'Assisst'".

 

 

 

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Here are a few more. Change the subtitle to something like "98% done", please.

 

 

PLEASE REMAKE THE MAP SHOWING ROUTES TO THE ALTAR. "DRAYNOR" MUST BE CAPITALISED IN THE KEY

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lets take a look at the method.

Take this out. Of course you're going to look at the method. This is what the guide's for, nu?

Always be truthful when assisting others, if you aren't, this will lead to being flamed and hated by many players who trusted you and wanted to get the most out of 27-28 rune essence, while you get experience.

Split this into two sentences. Put a period after "others" instead of a comma and capitalise "If". Take out the comma between "essence" and "while". Change "get experience" to "got experience".

You need nothing in your inventory, but may wish to bring a air talisman in case you don't have an air tiara.

You missed the article here. Change "a air talisman" to "an air talisman".

When being assisted, you will get a screen with pink writing in it like so:

Add a comma between "assissted" and "you".

 

For your section title "How to Get There", take off the question mark. The statement you are making is not a question.

When you see someone saying "#x assist!" you may right click on them and 'Click Assist'

What I meant with this correction that only "Assisst" should have apostrophes around it. Not "'Click Assisst'", write "Click 'Assisst'".

 

 

 

 

Ok thanks but after i finish retouching the map will there be anything else to add/change?

 

 

 

~Hybrid :wizard:

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Not going to put all the hyper links since it's not nessisary, but change:

 

As you can see the blue line shows you a path from Draynor Village and the red path shows a path from Falador East bank. Travelling from Falador is much quicker and you will get more air runes per hour. You do not need to complete the Rune Mysteries quest to gain access to the air altar, as opposed to buying rune essence.

 

To:

 

As you can see the red line shows you a path from Draynor Village and the green path shows a path from Falador East bank. Travelling from Falador is much quicker and you will get more air runes per hour. You do not need to complete the Rune Mysteries quest to gain access to the air altar, as opposed to buying rune essence.

 

Bolded the parts that should be changed.

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Read the spoiler text, sonny. There's no dirty pictures in there or anything.

Say what?

 

Not going to put all the hyper links since it's not nessisary, but change:

 

As you can see the blue line shows you a path from Draynor Village and the red path shows a path from Falador East bank. Travelling from Falador is much quicker and you will get more air runes per hour. You do not need to complete the Rune Mysteries quest to gain access to the air altar, as opposed to buying rune essence.

 

To:

 

As you can see the red line shows you a path from Draynor Village and the green path shows a path from Falador East bank. Travelling from Falador is much quicker and you will get more air runes per hour. You do not need to complete the Rune Mysteries quest to gain access to the air altar, as opposed to buying rune essence.

 

Bolded the parts that should be changed.

Fixed

 

at the top where it should say Written by is actually says 'WritteM by'

Fixed

 

 

Thank-you all!

 

 

 

~Hybrid :aware:

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Lets take a look at the method.

Take this out. Of course you're going to look at the method. This is what the guide's for, nu?

Always be truthful when assisting others, if you aren't, this will lead to being flamed and hated by many players who trusted you and wanted to get the most out of 27-28 rune essence, while you get experience.

Split this into two sentences. Put a period after "others" instead of a comma and capitalise "If". Take out the comma between "essence" and "while". Change "get experience" to "got experience".

You need nothing in your inventory, but may wish to bring a air talisman in case you don't have an air tiara.

You missed the article here. Change "a air talisman" to "an air talisman".

When being assisted, you will get a screen with pink writing in it like so:

Add a comma between "assissted" and "you".

 

For your section title "How to Get There", take off the question mark. The statement you are making is not a question.

When you see someone saying "#x assist!" you may right click on them and 'Click Assist'

What I meant with this correction that only "Assisst" should have apostrophes around it. Not "'Click Assisst'", write "Click 'Assisst'".

^^These are edits were in the spoiler bar before. Do them now.

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Lets take a look at the method.

Take this out. Of course you're going to look at the method. This is what the guide's for, nu?

Always be truthful when assisting others, if you aren't, this will lead to being flamed and hated by many players who trusted you and wanted to get the most out of 27-28 rune essence, while you get experience.

Split this into two sentences. Put a period after "others" instead of a comma and capitalise "If". Take out the comma between "essence" and "while". Change "get experience" to "got experience".

You need nothing in your inventory, but may wish to bring a air talisman in case you don't have an air tiara.

You missed the article here. Change "a air talisman" to "an air talisman".

When being assisted, you will get a screen with pink writing in it like so:

Add a comma between "assissted" and "you".

 

For your section title "How to Get There", take off the question mark. The statement you are making is not a question.

When you see someone saying "#x assist!" you may right click on them and 'Click Assist'

What I meant with this correction that only "Assisst" should have apostrophes around it. Not "'Click Assisst'", write "Click 'Assisst'".

 

 

 

^^These are edits were in the spoiler bar before. Do them now.

 

 

I did do them. =P

 

 

~Hybrid :wizard:

Edited by Hybrid Guy19

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You need nothing in your inventory, but may wish to bring a air talisman

Remember, it's "an air talisman"

After being assisted, you click on the air altar when you see two hands shaking with each other on the bottom right hand-corner of the screen.

Take out the hyphen between "hand" and "corner". Replace it between "right" and "hand".

Please note that if you have a higher Runecrafting level, you will have more people wanting your assistince, and you will receive more experience per hour than you normally would with 44 Runecrafting. It is suggested that you have 66 Runecrafting so you may turn this into nice quick experience.

Place a comma between "level" and "you".

ou don't need to wear anything other than your air tiara, but you may also wear random event or holiday event clothing too, since those items are normally weightless.

Make "ou" into "you".

As you can see The red line shows you a path from Draynor Village and the green path shows a path from Falador East bank. Travelling from Falador is much quicker and you will get more air runes per hour. You do not need to complete the Rune Mysteries quest to gain access to the air altar, as opposed to buying rune essence.

Remove "As you can see" and capitalise "the".

 

Just a last few nitpicks. You might be done after this.

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I noticed this mistake:

 

You don't need to wear anything other than your air tiara, but ou may also wear random event or holiday event clothing too, since those items are normally weightless.

 

Change "ou" for "you", a small mistake.

 

Edit: Oops, some one said it before me.

Edited by finisterra15

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*cough*Special thanks pl0x? :aware: *cough*

 

Ok first things first you're gonna need to know what world you can Runecraft in...

 

Change to:

 

Now there is only one world you can Air run in. That world is world 16. This is a free play server so everyone can go on it. It is shown in the picture below.

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You need nothing in your inventory, but may wish to bring a air talisman

Remember, it's "an air talisman"

After being assisted, you click on the air altar when you see two hands shaking with each other on the bottom right hand-corner of the screen.

Take out the hyphen between "hand" and "corner". Replace it between "right" and "hand".

Please note that if you have a higher Runecrafting level, you will have more people wanting your assistince, and you will receive more experience per hour than you normally would with 44 Runecrafting. It is suggested that you have 66 Runecrafting so you may turn this into nice quick experience.

Place a comma between "level" and "you".

ou don't need to wear anything other than your air tiara, but you may also wear random event or holiday event clothing too, since those items are normally weightless.

Make "ou" into "you".

As you can see The red line shows you a path from Draynor Village and the green path shows a path from Falador East bank. Travelling from Falador is much quicker and you will get more air runes per hour. You do not need to complete the Rune Mysteries quest to gain access to the air altar, as opposed to buying rune essence.

Remove "As you can see" and capitalise "the".

 

 

 

 

Just a last few nitpicks. You might be done after this.

 

 

 

ok I'll fix them in about 2 hours from this post.

 

Note-to-self: ADD DESIREFUL TO SPECIAL THANKS!

 

 

~Hybrid :wizard:

Edited by Hybrid Guy19

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Nice guide.

 

 

If there was a rating, 1/10 because you did not mention the word waffles once.

 

 

 

 

Kidding. I'd give it a 9.

 

 

 

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Nice guide.

 

 

If there was a rating, 1/10 because you did not mention the word waffles once.

 

 

 

 

Kidding. I'd give it a 9.

 

 

 

Thanks yet dont ask why but what is a waffle?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

J/K...Not...Not...Not...Not

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Hybird :wizard:

 

P.S. thanks for the rating

Edited by Hybrid Guy19

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lol looking good hybrid, came to check up on some mistakes...didn't find any :) i congratulate all who helped hybrid finish the guide :aware: *sniff* no im not crying! nice final touches on the guide guys!

 

~donzie guy19

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lol looking good hybrid, came to check up on some mistakes...didn't find any :P i congratulate all who helped hybrid finish the guide :) *sniff* no im not crying! nice final touches on the guide guys!

 

~donzie guy19

 

Lol cound't have finished without you!

 

~Hybrid :aware:

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As this is currently not submitted, here's more nitpicks:

 

 

Now there is only one world you can Air run in. That world is world 16.

This doesn't need to be two sentences. Rewrite it to say "The only world you can run Air runes is World 16."

You will be taken to a screen with 9 skills listed and you want to chose "Runecrafting" in order to assist them in Runecrafting.

Say "Choose" instead. "Chose" is past tense and wrong in this context.

As being the assister, you want to have a Runecrafting level of 44 or higher. to get the best out of it, as The lower your Runecrafting level the less assists you will get, meaning the less experience a day.

Say "As the assister". Put a comma between "assister" and "you". Put a period after "higher". Take out the text as shown and capitalise "The".

...more players wanting your assistince

The correct spelling is "assistance".

...hold the control button (ctrl)

Capitalise "Ctrl".

You won't lose cash if you are the person getting experience, and you won't gain any if you are a runner, however you do get the runes and you may wish to sell the air runes. You may wish to sell the air runes or use the air runes with spells that may help you level up your magic skill.

The end of the first sentence there says "you may wish to sell the air runes". The sentence that follows it says "You may wish to sell the air runes..." End the first sentence at "...get the runes" and take out all the text until the end of that sentence.

This is a free play server...

Change it to "freeplay" or just "free server".

 

 

 

 

 

Good job!

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As this is currently not submitted, here's more nitpicks:

 

 

Now there is only one world you can Air run in. That world is world 16.

This doesn't need to be two sentences. Rewrite it to say "The only world you can run Air runes is World 16."

You will be taken to a screen with 9 skills listed and you want to chose "Runecrafting" in order to assist them in Runecrafting.

Say "Choose" instead. "Chose" is past tense and wrong in this context.

As being the assister, you want to have a Runecrafting level of 44 or higher. to get the best out of it, as The lower your Runecrafting level the less assists you will get, meaning the less experience a day.

Say "As the assister". Put a comma between "assister" and "you". Put a period after "higher". Take out the text as shown and capitalise "The".

...more players wanting your assistince

The correct spelling is "assistance".

...hold the control button (ctrl)

Capitalise "Ctrl".

You won't lose cash if you are the person getting experience, and you won't gain any if you are a runner, however you do get the runes and you may wish to sell the air runes. You may wish to sell the air runes or use the air runes with spells that may help you level up your magic skill.

The end of the first sentence there says "you may wish to sell the air runes". The sentence that follows it says "You may wish to sell the air runes..." End the first sentence at "...get the runes" and take out all the text until the end of that sentence.

This is a free play server...

Change it to "freeplay" or just "free server".

 

 

 

 

 

Good job!

 

Finished it thanks for all the help all of you!

 

 

~Hybrid :wizard:

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I was wondering if you could add in the scamming that's going on inside the altar. At times there're more people that lie about their multiplier than honest crafters, so it would be very appreciated (and useful) to stress out that runners should check the hiscores before requesting assistance. It only needs to be done once so it's not a burdensome task.

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you also need to explain what "open" means....but they changed open to assist now? dang....back then youd get 2k each one for bringing them ess.

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