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Cookthechef

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Thoughts?

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Third one has an interesting flow to it.

Second one is nice looking, but a little flat.

First one is just a mess imo.

Edited by Adam?

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The first one could use some better text, but other then that it's pretty good.

 

The second one I like a lot.

 

The third one, I have to agree with Adam, isn't too decent. I see you're trying to add some flow with the shape of the guitar but it just doesn't work out. I say maybe throw a C4D in the background instead of that blur thing you've got going on. Also, the text isn't really that great.

 

Good to see you back on Sals doing GFX! :D

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Criticism:

 

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Too messy, lacks color scheme. Text is... Lighting is... Colors are... You rusty. Basically lots of stuff slapped together.

 

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Better theme overall. Feels flat and the effects are dull and messy/careless. Text is ehh. Colors are ehh. Stuff slapped together again.

 

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Colors better, semiflow. Lacks effects, needs work on text. Mostly just too plain though. And colors still need work. :D

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Eh...compared to your usual standards I would have guessed you did these before I met you and you started helping me. Not that I like dumping all over your work like this! :D

 

The first one reminds me of your Gorillaz one but I love that one.

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Edited by Fatalysm

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The first one is just all over the place. Colors are waaaay too busy, text is just downright awful, and lighting is a bit off.

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